List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lặp lại ý giống nhau. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and prevents me from forgetting anything.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì đúng và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete before I start working, and it motivates me to finish them on time.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên đưa ra ý kiến cụ thể hơn và giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

Example: I'm not sure, but I think some people find making lists boring or time-consuming, so they prefer to remember things mentally.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lặp lại từ. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's very convenient and comfortable to use.

× Before I working I offered make a list of work I need to complete today and it inspired me to complete it.

✓ Before I work, I often make a list of work I need to complete today and it inspires me to complete it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'working' instead of the base verb 'work' after 'Before I'. Also, 'offered' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'often'. The verb 'inspired' should be in present tense 'inspires' to match the habitual action. The correct form is 'Before I work, I often make a list...'.

× I always bring my phone with myself and it is it is very comfortable and convenient.

✓ I always bring my phone with me and it is very comfortable and convenient.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. The correct pronoun after 'bring' is the object pronoun 'me'. Also, the phrase 'it is it is' is redundant and should be 'it is'.

× Yes I do, I always make a list of anything I need to buy. It helps me to ensure I forgot anything important and avoid me forgetting anything else.

✓ Yes, I do. I always make a list of anything I need to buy. It helps me ensure I don't forget anything important and avoid forgetting anything else.

The sentence 'It helps me to ensure I forgot anything important' is incorrect because 'forgot' is past tense, but the intended meaning is present/future. It should be 'I don't forget'. Also, 'avoid me forgetting' is awkward; better is 'avoid forgetting'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I'm not sure, but I think people think it is.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think people don't like making lists because they find it tedious.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It ends abruptly with 'it is' without specifying what 'it' refers to. A complete sentence is needed to convey the idea clearly.

× Or what I refer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone with myself and it is it is very comfortable and convenient.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone with me and it is very comfortable and convenient.

The phrase 'Or what I refer to' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to'. Also, 'with myself' is incorrect; it should be 'with me'. The repeated 'it is it is' is redundant and should be corrected to 'it is'.