List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như 'going to shopping' nên sửa thành 'going shopping'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó mới giải thích thêm. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I enjoy choosing items spontaneously. For example, I like to browse around the mall with my family and pick what I like without restrictions.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu 'You have to work something important' không tự nhiên và hơi mơ hồ. Nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for important work tasks. First, I set my priorities, and then I focus all my attention on completing them efficiently.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với ý kiến cá nhân và lý do cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, câu đầu hơi dài và không cần thiết. Nên bắt đầu trực tiếp với ý kiến và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because it depends on their personalities. For instance, I sometimes avoid lists when I am too busy or want the freedom to choose spontaneously.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng cách dùng từ 'on the digital technology' không tự nhiên. Nên dùng từ đơn giản và cụ thể hơn như 'on my phone or computer'. Thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I definitely prefer making lists using digital devices. For example, I usually create my timetable and important lists on my computer to help me focus on my priorities.

× I didn't even make a list before going to shopping.

✓ I didn't even make a list before going shopping.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to' when used with activities. The correct form is 'going shopping'. This is a common mistake with verb + -ing forms after 'go'.

× Instead, I prefer the experience of going to the shopping with no list, choosing my favorite ones, and hanging around in the shopping mall with my family.

✓ Instead, I prefer the experience of going shopping with no list, choosing my favorite ones, and hanging around the shopping mall with my family.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'shopping' and 'shopping mall'. 'Shopping' as an activity does not require an article, and 'shopping mall' is a general noun here, so 'the' is unnecessary before 'shopping mall' unless referring to a specific one known to both speaker and listener.

× You have to work something important.

✓ You have to work on something important.

The verb 'work' when followed by an object meaning a task or project requires the preposition 'on'. Saying 'work something' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'work on something'.

× I will set my priorities first and give all of my concentration to that.

✓ I will set my priorities first and give all of my concentration to them.

The pronoun 'that' is singular, but 'priorities' is plural. Therefore, the pronoun should be plural 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'priorities'.

× I would definitely choose to make a list on the digital technology.

✓ I would definitely choose to make a list using digital technology.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'digital technology'. The correct preposition is 'using' to indicate the means or method by which the list is made.