Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I used to be my wife when I saw because I can easily just do something I can buy.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I see. I usually make a list of work list before I go to the the license and because it's very remembering about everything and you do and you do study.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Some people don't like this because they they don't have time to make this way or they don't have anything to buy, so they pay for me to make this in that.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I usually make a list on my phone because I think it's easy to track because when I go out I can't. I can't take a paper Rd. anyway so I can check on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng liên quan đến việc mua sắm và làm danh sách.
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý. Hãy sử dụng các từ vựng liên quan đến công việc và việc lập danh sách.
Example: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me remember all my tasks and stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they prefer to remember things in their head.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn.
Example: I usually make a list on my phone because it's easier to carry and I can check it anytime when I am out.
× Yes, I used to be my wife when I saw because I can easily just do something I can buy.
✓ Yes, I used to be with my wife when I shopped because I can easily just buy something.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'be my wife' instead of 'be with my wife' and 'when I saw' instead of 'when I shopped'. The pronouns and verbs are misused, causing confusion. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.
× Yes, I see. I usually make a list of work list before I go to the the license and because it's very remembering about everything and you do and you do study.
✓ Yes, I see. I usually make a work list before I go to the office because it helps me remember everything I need to do and study.
The phrase 'make a list of work list' is redundant and unclear. 'Go to the the license' is incorrect; likely intended 'go to the office'. 'It's very remembering about everything' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'it helps me remember everything'. Prepositions and word choices were incorrect, leading to confusion.
× Some people don't like this because they they don't have time to make this way or they don't have anything to buy, so they pay for me to make this in that.
✓ Some people don't like this because they don't have time to make lists or they don't have anything to buy, so they prefer me to make the list for them.
The sentence misuses pronouns and phrases such as 'make this way' and 'pay for me to make this in that', which are unclear. Correcting pronouns and expressions clarifies the intended meaning.
× I usually make a list on my phone because I think it's easy to track because when I go out I can't. I can't take a paper Rd. anyway so I can check on my phone.
✓ I usually make a list on my phone because I think it's easy to track. When I go out, I can't take paper anyway, so I can check on my phone.
The phrase 'take a paper Rd.' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'take paper'. The sentence structure was fragmented and needed punctuation for clarity. Prepositions and article usage were corrected for grammatical accuracy.