List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example to support your answer. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Sometimes I make a shopping list, but usually I don't because I remember what I need. For example, I often buy the same groceries every week, so a list is not necessary.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and give a clear reason for your opinion. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more details to support your answer.

Example: No, I never make a list for my work because I prefer to keep things flexible. I think making lists can be restrictive and may not suit my working style.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear reason and explain it with specific details. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find them unnecessary. For instance, they may have a good memory or prefer to be spontaneous rather than following a plan.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with reasons and examples, using linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I won't lose it like paper. For example, I can easily edit my list and access it anytime.

× Sometimes yes, but in general I I don't need any list for shopping in my opinion.

✓ Sometimes yes, but in general I don't need any lists for shopping in my opinion.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to a general concept of multiple lists, not a single list. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about lists in general.

× Because some people don't need a list for something. Or maybe more probably people. People may may do any list for something, but in general they don't need lists in my opinion.

✓ Because some people don't need a list for something. Or maybe more probably people may make a list for something, but in general they don't need lists in my opinion.

The phrase 'do any list' is incorrect; the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'may may' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'may'.

× I prepare phone because because it it is a chance that I lost my paper and it's it's not good of course and I I will choose my phone.

✓ I prefer my phone because there is a chance that I might lose my paper and that's not good of course, so I will choose my phone.

The verb 'prepare' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prefer'. Also, 'it is a chance that I lost my paper' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a chance that I might lose my paper' to express possibility. The sentence is also improved for clarity and naturalness.