List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating your habit and then explaining why. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, which affect understanding. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences and avoid unnecessary filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I complete all assignments on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific about reasons why some people dislike making lists.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and they may feel frustrated when they cannot complete all the tasks on the list.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, which makes it easier to access my list and reduces the chance of losing it compared to paper.

× I have my personal list when I do shopping because I think it is very convenient when you have everything that you need to purchase right in front of your eyes.

✓ I have my personal list when I go shopping because I think it is very convenient when you have everything that you need to purchase right in front of your eyes.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' because 'shopping' is a noun here and the verb 'go' is used with activities like shopping.

× So it contributes a lot to remember in everything that you do not have to forget to buy.

✓ So it helps a lot to remember everything so that you do not forget to buy anything.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Contributes to remember in everything' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'helps to remember everything' and clarifies the meaning.

× I am personally convinced that I'm a big planner person because I always have a list of runs that I need to complete an at least of a of assignments that I need to send to my employer because I think it's really important to have everything on your list.

✓ I am personally convinced that I'm a big planner because I always have a list of tasks that I need to complete and at least a few assignments that I need to send to my employer because I think it's really important to have everything on your list.

The phrase 'list of runs' is incorrect; 'runs' should be replaced with 'tasks' or similar. Also, 'an at least of a of assignments' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'at least a few assignments'. This corrects plural and article usage.

× I think because it takes. Too much time for them and people I think are not most of the time satisfied with the majority of deals and Iran's that they haven't completed yet so which makes them frustrated and that is the reason why they stop creating such lists.

✓ I think it's because it takes too much time for them, and people are often not satisfied with the majority of tasks that they haven't completed yet, which makes them frustrated and is the reason why they stop creating such lists.

The original sentence has punctuation errors, unclear phrases like 'deals and Iran's', and awkward structure. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× I prefer to use my phone since I have it set everywhere with me, so it makes me easier to have an access to my phone rather than to have a paper and it increases the chances to just lose this paper and forget everything that I need to do.

✓ I prefer to use my phone since I have it with me everywhere, so it makes it easier for me to access my phone rather than having paper, which increases the chances of losing the paper and forgetting everything I need to do.

The phrase 'set everywhere with me' is incorrect; 'have it with me everywhere' is correct. Also, 'makes me easier to have an access' should be 'makes it easier for me to access'. Prepositions and article usage are corrected for clarity.