List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevaplarınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutarak gereksiz tekrarları önleyin. Örneğin, alışveriş listesi yapma alışkanlığınızı açık ve doğrudan ifade edin ve destekleyici detayları bağlaçlarla bağlayın.

Example: I usually ask my mom what we need for the house before shopping, and I try to remember the items while shopping. However, if there is something important, I make a list to avoid forgetting it.

Suggestion: Cümle yapılarınızı daha düzgün ve anlamlı hale getirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade etmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Örneğin, motivasyonunuzun değişken olduğunu ve bu yüzden liste yapmadığınızı net bir şekilde açıklayın.

Example: I usually don't make a list for my work because my motivation varies. Sometimes I feel unmotivated, and other times more motivated, so I prefer to follow whichever plan I have in mind at the moment.

Suggestion: Daha akıcı ve doğal cümleler kurmalısınız. Düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla birbirine bağlayarak anlatımınızı güçlendirin. Örneğin, liste yapmanın kısıtlayıcı hissettirdiğini ve bu yüzden bazı insanların sevmediğini açıklayın.

Example: Based on my experience, some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by them. Sometimes, lists make them feel pressured or inadequate, which can be discouraging.

Suggestion: Cümlelerinizi daha doğru ve akıcı hale getirmek için dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin. Ayrıca, fikirlerinizi net bir şekilde ifade etmek için bağlaçlar kullanın. Örneğin, kağıt ve telefon listesinin her ikisinin de etkili olduğunu ve tercihinizin ruh halinize bağlı olduğunu açıklayın.

Example: In my opinion, both paper and phone lists are effective. Depending on my mood, I sometimes make a list on paper and other times on my phone.

× Well, usually I asked my mom about what we need for the house before I go shopping and I usually try to memorize it while I do the shopping.

✓ Well, usually I ask my mom about what we need for the house before I go shopping and I usually try to memorize it while I do the shopping.

The verb 'asked' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'ask' should be used instead.

× But. If there's something important I need to get that my mom wants or I need and I don't want slipping out of my mind.

✓ But if there's something important I need to get that my mom wants or I need, and I don't want it slipping out of my mind, I make a list.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a main verb, making it incomplete. Combining the clauses and adding a main verb corrects the sentence structure.

× I usually don't choose to make a list for my work because. Like weird people, sometimes I get unmotivated, sometimes are more motivated than usual and change, so I usually stick out to whichever plan I have in mind.

✓ I usually don't choose to make a list for my work because, like weird people, sometimes I get unmotivated, sometimes more motivated than usual, and my motivation changes, so I usually stick to whichever plan I have in mind.

The phrase 'sometimes are more motivated' lacks a subject and is unclear. Adding 'my motivation changes' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'stick out to' is incorrect; it should be 'stick to'.

× Well, based on my personal experience. It makes me feel like that it's restricting me, like the things that I'm going to do that day.

✓ Well, based on my personal experience, it makes me feel like it's restricting me, like the things that I'm going to do that day.

The original has a sentence fragment 'Well, based on my personal experience.' which should be connected to the next sentence with a comma for correct structure.

× I feel like the list is going to restrict me or. Sometimes even that I'm not enough and I feel bad for that so.

✓ I feel like the list is going to restrict me, or sometimes even make me feel like I'm not enough, and I feel bad for that, so.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'make me feel like' clarifies the meaning and connects the ideas properly.

× In my opinion boat are really effective if you want to make a list, but depending on my mood is sometimes make a list on paper and sometimes make list on my phone.

✓ In my opinion, both are really effective if you want to make a list, but depending on my mood, I sometimes make a list on paper and sometimes make a list on my phone.

'Boat' is a typo for 'both'. Also, the sentence lacks subjects in some clauses and needs commas for clarity.