Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
No, I don't. I usually shop online immediately when some daily items are absent.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I often make lists for my work and it works usually because I like to prepare for. Things in advance.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think people who don't like making lists. Is because they said ghost that hard to retrieve and sometimes it's just likes a waste of time?
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps to set reminders and. Change calendars to help. Manage my time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答不够连贯,表达不自然,且句子结构有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免语法错误。
Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop. Instead, I tend to buy daily items online as soon as I realize they are running out.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中断且表达不完整,建议使用完整句子并且更自然地连接句子。
Example: Yes, I often make lists for my work, and they usually help me stay organized because I like to prepare things in advance.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 句子结构混乱,表达不清晰,建议简化句子并使用正确的语法和词汇。
Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to keep track of them, and sometimes they feel it's a waste of time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答中断且有语法错误,建议使用完整句子并更流畅地表达观点。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that help me set reminders and manage my calendar efficiently.
× I usually shop online immediately when some daily items are absent.
✓ I usually shop online immediately when some daily items are absent.
该句中没有明显的单复数错误,'items'为复数形式,符合语境。
× Yes, I often make lists for my work and it works usually because I like to prepare for. Things in advance.
✓ Yes, I often make lists for my work and it usually works because I like to prepare things in advance.
原句中断句错误,'prepare for.'后面不应有句号,且'Things'不应大写。应将句子连贯起来,调整词序使表达更自然。
× I think people who don't like making lists. Is because they said ghost that hard to retrieve and sometimes it's just likes a waste of time?
✓ I think people who don't like making lists say that it's hard to retrieve and sometimes it's just like a waste of time.
原句中断句错误,'lists.'后不应有句号,且'said ghost'应为'say that it's','likes'应为'like',句子结构混乱,需调整使其通顺。
× I prefer make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps to set reminders and. Change calendars to help. Manage my time.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps to set reminders and change calendars to help manage my time.
'prefer'后应接不定式'to make',且句中多处断句错误,句子应连贯,去除多余句号。