List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, avoid starting sentences with conjunctions and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: It depends on what I need to buy. If I only need two or three items, I usually remember them. However, if I have to buy many grocery items, I prefer to make a list on my phone to keep track.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases and focus on clarity.

Example: It depends. I usually make a To-Do List for my daily tasks because it helps me stay organized. Most of the time, it works well. But if I only have one or two tasks, I don't write them down and try to finish them early in the morning to have a free day.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward expressions and lacks coherence. Try to use more natural phrases and connect your ideas logically. For example, explain the reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

Example: I believe it depends on personal habits. Some people may find making lists tiring or unnecessary, so they prefer to remember their tasks mentally instead of writing them down.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and make your answer more concise and natural.

Example: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I use it all the time. This way, I can easily check my list anytime and anywhere, which is more convenient than writing on paper.

× Well, it usually depends because if I'm going to the shop to buy two or three things.

✓ Well, it usually depends; if I'm going to the shop to buy two or three things,

The original sentence is a fragment because it ends abruptly after 'things.' It should be connected properly to the following clause to form a complete sentence. Use a semicolon or conjunction to link the ideas clearly.

× Then I usually keep it in my mind and by but if it's a small grocery things that I need to buy from many of them, then I usually make a list in the mobile.

✓ Then I usually keep it in my mind and buy, but if there are many small grocery items that I need to buy, then I usually make a list on my mobile.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'by' should be 'buy'; 'small grocery things' is awkward, better as 'small grocery items'; 'from many of them' is unclear and unnecessary; 'in the mobile' should be 'on my mobile.' Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Who will? It usually depends.

✓ Who will? It usually depends.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically acceptable. 'Who will?' is a short question, and 'It usually depends.' is a correct response.

× I make To Do List for my whole day routine, so I try to write what I need to work on and it usually work most of the time.

✓ I make a To-Do List for my whole day routine, so I try to write what I need to work on and it usually works most of the time.

'To Do List' should be 'To-Do List' with hyphens and an article 'a' before it. 'work' should be 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it.' This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× But sometimes if I just had one or two things that I don't need to write down, I can complete my work first thing in the morning.

✓ But sometimes if I just have one or two things that I don't need to write down, I can complete my work first thing in the morning.

The use of 'had' (past tense) is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a present or habitual situation. 'Have' (present tense) should be used instead.

× An brief free whole day.

✓ and have a brief free whole day.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence with 'and have' to form a complete thought.

× some people are not so much energetic enough to make list of everything.

✓ some people are not energetic enough to make a list of everything.

'so much energetic' is incorrect; 'energetic' is an adjective and does not use 'much.' Also, 'make list' needs an article 'a' before 'list.' Removing 'so much' and adding 'a' corrects the sentence.

× So I think they just keep it and keep it in their mind that what they need to do.

✓ So I think they just keep it in their mind, remembering what they need to do.

The phrase 'keep it and keep it in their mind that what they need to do' is awkward and repetitive. Simplifying to 'keep it in their mind, remembering what they need to do' improves clarity and grammar.

× I will definitely make a list on my phone because it is a convenient option for me as I'm on my phone 24 hours, so whenever I am I can just take out my mobile and see what are those.

✓ I definitely make a list on my phone because it is a convenient option for me as I'm on my phone 24 hours, so whenever I am, I can just take out my mobile and see what they are.

'I will definitely make' suggests future, but the context is habitual action, so present simple 'I definitely make' is better. Also, 'see what are those' is incorrect word order; it should be 'see what they are.'

× So it's really convenient and easy for me to use the list on the mobile phone rather than the list or write down on the. Paper.

✓ So it's really convenient and easy for me to use the list on the mobile phone rather than making a list or writing it down on paper.

'write down on the. Paper' is incorrect; 'on the' is incomplete and the period is misplaced. Also, 'the list or write down' is unclear; better to say 'making a list or writing it down on paper.' This corrects preposition and article usage.