Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I feel a bit lazy to be repaired on. However, I think making a list can be very helpful because it have you remember everything you need any set time, sometime not having a Little Mix up, being more inconvenient and stressful.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
No, I don't need it is because I like looking thing not is.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Because making lists help people save time. Ann is. Earphone an convenient.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I like making a list on my phone because I always caring my phone in my bath.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Example: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it unnecessary. However, I know that making a list can help me remember everything I need and avoid confusion, which makes shopping less stressful.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 10.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
Example: No, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to keep things in my mind and handle tasks as they come.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 5.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không rõ ràng. Bạn cần trả lời đúng câu hỏi, giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be spontaneous rather than planning everything.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, giải thích rõ lý do và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.
Example: I prefer making a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's convenient to check my list anytime.
× I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I feel a bit lazy to be repaired on.
✓ I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I feel a bit lazy to be prepared.
The phrase 'to be repaired on' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'to be prepared' which means to get ready. 'Repaired' means fixed, which does not fit the context.
× However, I think making a list can be very helpful because it have you remember everything you need any set time, sometime not having a Little Mix up, being more inconvenient and stressful.
✓ However, I think making a list can be very helpful because it helps you remember everything you need at any set time, sometimes avoiding a little mix-up, which can be more inconvenient and stressful.
The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'it'. It should be 'helps'. Also, prepositions and sentence structure were corrected for clarity.
× No, I don't need it is because I like looking thing not is.
✓ No, I don't need it because I like looking for things without it.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence that fits the intended meaning.
× Because making lists help people save time. Ann is. Earphone an convenient.
✓ Because making lists helps people save time. They are convenient.
The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Ann is. Earphone an convenient.' is nonsensical and was corrected to a meaningful sentence. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'making lists'.
× I like making a list on my phone because I always caring my phone in my bath.
✓ I like making a list on my phone because I always carry my phone with me in my bag.
The verb 'caring' is incorrect; it should be 'carry'. Also, 'in my bath' is likely a mistake for 'in my bag'. The preposition 'with me' is added for clarity.