List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, avoid redundancy, and check your grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I like to calculate the total price beforehand to compare it with my budget. If the total cost is within my budget, I buy everything on the list. However, if it exceeds my limit, I remove unnecessary items to avoid overspending.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and correct grammar to improve clarity.

Example: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to do. However, it doesn't always work because I am a high school mathematics teacher and also a coordinator for the primary section. At school, I have to attend to children, parents, and many tasks. Therefore, I prioritize the most important tasks first.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite long and a bit confusing. Try to be more concise and clear. Avoid making assumptions about others and focus on general reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Some people do not like making lists because they may not have clear goals or plans. They might prefer to follow others' advice rather than organizing their own tasks. Also, some find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better linking words and correcting minor grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more smoothly and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me transfer my thoughts without distractions. Using a phone can be interrupting due to various apps and notifications, so writing on paper is a better option for me.

× Yes, I do make a list when I show up because I'm a mathematics student and I like to calculate the total price of items before hand this selfie to compare cost with my budget.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I show up because I'm a mathematics student and I like to calculate the total price of items beforehand to compare cost with my budget.

The phrase 'before hand this selfie' is incorrect and confusing. The correct adverb is 'beforehand' which means 'in advance'. The word 'selfie' is irrelevant here and should be removed. This correction clarifies the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× If the total is in within my budget, I buy everything on the list but give exceed my limit.

✓ If the total is within my budget, I buy everything on the list but if it exceeds my limit,

The phrase 'in within' is redundant; only 'within' is needed. Also, 'give exceed' is incorrect; it should be 'if it exceeds' to correctly express the condition. This correction fixes the preposition misuse and clarifies the conditional structure.

× I remove the unnecessary attempt to avoid the overspending's.

✓ I remove the unnecessary items to avoid overspending.

The word 'attempt' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'items'. Also, 'overspending's' is incorrect because 'overspending' is an uncountable noun and does not take a possessive or plural form. This correction fixes the singular/plural misuse and improves clarity.

× Yes, I make the list of works and tasks which I have to do.

✓ Yes, I make a list of work and tasks which I have to do.

The word 'works' is generally uncountable when referring to tasks or jobs, so 'work' is correct here. 'Tasks' remains plural as it refers to multiple items. This correction addresses the singular/plural issue for proper noun usage.

× So when I go to school I have to look up for the child's and parents and multiple tasks.

✓ So when I go to school I have to look after the children and parents and handle multiple tasks.

The phrase 'look up for' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'look after' meaning to take care of. Also, 'child's' is possessive singular but should be plural 'children' here. This correction fixes preposition misuse and plural form.

× So I select the most important one first.

✓ So I select the most important ones first.

Since the speaker refers to multiple tasks, 'ones' (plural) is appropriate instead of 'one' (singular). This correction fixes the singular/plural agreement.

× Some people don't make list because in my perspective they don't have any aims or goals in their life.

✓ Some people don't make lists because, in my perspective, they don't have any aims or goals in their lives.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'some people'. Also, 'life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people. This correction fixes pronoun and noun agreement.

× They are doing whatever their parents or their friends are saying to them or the I think they're not inspired from any great personality so they think that they are the great personality so.

✓ They are doing whatever their parents or friends tell them, and I think they're not inspired by any great personality, so they think that they themselves are great personalities.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'Are saying to them' is better as 'tell them'. 'Inspired from' should be 'inspired by'. 'The great personality' should be plural 'great personalities'. 'They themselves' clarifies the subject. This correction improves pronoun use and clarity.

× That's why they don't make a list of their tasks.

✓ That's why they don't make lists of their tasks.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural subject 'they'. This correction addresses noun number agreement.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I can transfer the data in my mind to the paper without any disturbance.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I can transfer the data from my mind to the paper without any disturbance.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'from' is the correct preposition to indicate the source of the data. This correction fixes preposition misuse.

× But while using the phone there are multiple apps and softwares which are interrupting me and I cannot transfer the whole data in my mind into the phone.

✓ But while using the phone, there are multiple apps and software which interrupt me, and I cannot transfer all the data in my mind into the phone.

'Softwares' is incorrect; 'software' is uncountable. 'Are interrupting' is better as 'interrupt' for habitual action. 'Whole data' is better as 'all the data'. This correction fixes noun number and verb tense.

× So I think paper writing on paper is a better option.

✓ So I think writing on paper is a better option.

The phrase 'paper writing on paper' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the first 'paper' clarifies the sentence. This correction fixes preposition and redundancy issues.