List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, clarify your points about trends and preferences with linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse and see what's new. For instance, I like to check out the latest trends and pick comfortable clothes that suit me.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage will improve clarity. For example, explain how you prioritize tasks and use reminders effectively.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my household chores. I prioritize important tasks at the top and less urgent ones at the bottom. Additionally, I set reminders to ensure I complete everything on time.

Suggestion: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide more specific reasons or examples why some people avoid making lists.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming. Moreover, they trust their memory to remember tasks, which works well for them in managing their daily activities.

Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary complex words and focus on clear, natural language. Complete your sentences fully and use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily check my list anytime without needing paper.

× Well I'm a shopaholic person and I don't make a list.

✓ Well, I'm a shopaholic and I don't make a list.

The word 'person' is unnecessary after 'shopaholic' because 'shopaholic' already describes a person. Removing 'person' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× I just randomly go in the store and look for trends are going on and what things I have and I don't have.

✓ I just randomly go into the store and look for the trends that are going on and what things I have and don't have.

The phrase 'go in the store' should be 'go into the store' to correctly express movement inside. Also, 'look for trends are going on' is incorrect; it should be 'look for the trends that are going on' to properly connect the clauses.

× And I like comfort table clothes so just I picked the cloth.

✓ And I like comfortable tablecloths, so I just pick the cloth.

The adjective 'comfort' should be 'comfortable' to describe the tablecloths. Also, 'table clothes' should be one word 'tablecloths'. The verb tense 'picked' should be present tense 'pick' to match the context.

× Definitely I. I make a list for my household chores that I have to manage.

✓ Definitely, I make a list for my household chores that I have to manage.

The sentence has an unnecessary period after 'I'. Removing it and adding a comma after 'Definitely' improves sentence flow and correctness.

× So I maintain the list by keeping the high prioritize items on that opened less important tasks.

✓ So I maintain the list by keeping the high-priority items on top and less important tasks at the bottom.

The phrase 'high prioritize items' is incorrect; it should be 'high-priority items'. Also, 'on that opened less important tasks' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'on top and less important tasks at the bottom' to express order clearly.

× At the bottom so that and I even make reminder so.

✓ At the bottom, and I even set reminders.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into a clear sentence with proper conjunctions and verb forms improves clarity.

× I find that few people don't like making list as it.

✓ I find that a few people don't like making lists as it

The phrase 'few people' implies almost none, but the intended meaning is some people, so 'a few people' is correct. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural usage.

× I find that few people don't like making list as it.

✓ I find that a few people don't like making lists as it

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists.

× Is a waste of time for them.

✓ is a waste of time for them.

This is a sentence fragment missing a subject. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to include a subject.

× They just are very good at their memory and they can remind what tasks they have to achieve in their life and they need to be fulfilled for a successful life.

✓ They are just very good at remembering and can recall what tasks they have to complete in their lives to be successful.

The phrase 'good at their memory' is incorrect; it should be 'good at remembering'. Also, 'they can remind' is incorrect; 'they can recall' or 'remember' is appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Well, in today's contemporary irido technological advancements, the everyone has us.

✓ Well, with today's contemporary technological advancements, everyone has gadgets.

The phrase 'irido technological advancements' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'technological advancements' is correct. 'The everyone has us' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone has gadgets' or similar.

× Gadget We have cell phone, so I usually prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient.

✓ We have gadgets like cell phones, so I usually prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Adding 'We have gadgets like cell phones' clarifies the meaning and improves flow.

× I don't have to look for the paper, I just carry my phone with me and.

✓ I don't have to look for paper; I just carry my phone with me.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing 'and' and connecting the ideas properly completes the sentence.