Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Do you make a list when you shop?
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Why don't some people like making list?
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Do you prefer to make a list on per pepper or your fun?
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 10.0Suggestion: 学生只是重复了考官的问题,没有给出任何回答。建议学生直接回答问题,并且用一两句说明理由或细节。
Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 10.0Suggestion: 学生没有回答问题,只是重复了考官的话。建议学生直接回答是否制作工作清单,并说明清单是否有效。
Example: Yes, I make a list for my work every day, and it works well because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 10.0Suggestion: 学生没有回答问题,只是重复了考官的问题。建议学生给出原因,并用连接词丰富答案。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 5.0Suggestion: 学生重复了问题且发音不清晰,影响理解。建议学生清楚表达自己的偏好,并说明理由。
Example: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit it anytime.
× Why don't some people like making list?
✓ Why don't some people like making lists?
这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”,因为前面提到了“some people”,表示不止一个人,习惯上用复数形式表示泛指多个列表。
× Do you prefer to make a list on per pepper or your fun?
✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
原句中的“per pepper”和“your fun”是拼写错误,正确的表达应该是“on paper”表示“在纸上”,以及“your phone”表示“你的手机”。这属于介词短语和名词的拼写错误,应改正以表达正确意思。