Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "love the singing most").

Example: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and clears my mind. For example, after a stressful day I often sing my favorite songs which calms me and improves my mood.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and a concise structure. Begin with a direct answer, then give a short explanation and an example. Replace filler words and informal phrases with clearer expressions.

Example: No, I have never had formal singing lessons. I usually sing for fun at home, so I would describe myself as an informal or hobby singer rather than a professional.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer, then one specific supporting detail. Fix grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words such as "because" and give a complete example sentence.

Example: I usually prefer to sing for my mother because she is very caring and supportive. For example, I sang a special song for her on her last birthday to show my appreciation.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion and two concise, specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrasing like "resonates our mind" and redundant "and also" repetitions.

Example: Yes, I think singing can make people happier because it releases stress and helps them express emotions. For instance, singing with friends at a party can lift everyone's mood quickly.

Suggestion: Clarify genres and correct vocabulary ("wrappers" → "rappers"). Answer directly, then give specific examples of when and why you listen. Avoid repetition and informal idioms unless accurate.

Example: Yes, I enjoy listening to other singers, especially pop and R&B when I want to relax. When I'm feeling low I listen to calm ballads, but energetic music by rappers motivates me while working.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and a concise structure: a direct answer plus a brief explanation. Remove unclear phrases like "my own original" and avoid extra fillers.

Example: No, I haven't taken any singing classes because I sing as a hobby rather than professionally. I enjoy singing from the heart and practice on my own at home.

× Well I'm very into in singing and it also gives me peace and calmness for my mind and I love the singing most.

✓ Well, I'm very into singing; it gives me peace and calms my mind, and I love singing the most.

The phrase 'into in singing' is incorrect preposition use; 'into' should be followed directly by a noun or gerund. 'Gives me peace and calmness for my mind' is awkward; use 'gives me peace and calms my mind' for correct verb + -ing and natural expression. 'The singing' should be 'singing' or 'singing the most' — avoid unnecessary articles. Suggestion: Use 'into singing', 'calms my mind', and avoid 'the' before 'singing' when speaking generally.

× No, I don't learn about singing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

The student used present simple negative 'don't learn' to refer to past experience. For past/present perfect experience, use present perfect 'haven't learned'. Also 'learn about singing' is unnatural; use 'learn how to sing' or 'taken singing lessons'. Suggestion: Use 'I haven't learned how to sing' or 'I haven't taken any singing lessons.'

× I'm usually do a normal singing.

✓ I usually sing casually.

'I'm usually do' mixes present continuous and simple present incorrectly. Use simple present 'I usually sing'. 'A normal singing' is ungrammatical; 'sing casually' or 'sing for fun' is more natural. Suggestion: Say 'I usually sing for fun' or 'I usually sing casually.'

× I'm not a actual singer and it's not my profession.

✓ I'm not an actual singer; it's not my profession.

Use the article 'an' before a vowel sound ('actual'). Suggestion: Use 'an' with words beginning with vowel sounds.

× So I'm uh, like a bathroom singer.

✓ So I'm, uh, like a bathroom singer.

This sentence is mostly fine; retained but corrected punctuation and spacing. No reflexive pronoun needed. (If treating 'bathroom singer' as informal descriptor, keep it.) Suggestion: Keep informal phrasing but ensure punctuation is clean.

× Well, I mostly prefer to sing for my mother.

✓ Well, I usually prefer to sing for my mother.

'Mostly prefer' is awkward; 'usually prefer' or 'prefer to sing for my mother' fits habitual present. Suggestion: Use 'usually' for habits.

× Uh, she is very caring for me and I love my mother also.

✓ She is very caring toward me, and I love my mother too.

'Caring for me' can be 'caring toward me' or 'cares for me'. 'I love my mother also' should be 'I love my mother too'. Suggestion: Use 'cares for me' or 'is very caring toward me' and 'too' for agreement.

× For example, last for example, on my mother's birthday, I sing a song for my mother and it.

✓ For example, last year on my mother's birthday, I sang a song for her.

Redundant 'for example' repeated; tense should be past 'sang' for a past event. 'and it.' is incomplete and must be removed. Use 'her' instead of repeating 'my mother'. Suggestion: Clean sentence: 'Last year on my mother's birthday, I sang a song for her.'

× Of course, singing brings a happiness to individuals and it also resonates our mind and also and make more talented a person and it's a good for the singing.

✓ Of course, singing brings happiness to people; it resonates with our minds, can make a person more talented, and is good for us.

Do not use 'a' before uncountable noun 'happiness'. 'Resonates our mind' needs 'resonates with our minds'. Remove extra 'and also'. 'Make more talented a person' should be 'make a person more talented'. 'It's a good for the singing' is ungrammatical; say 'is good for us' or 'is good for singing.' Suggestion: Use correct articles with uncountable nouns and proper prepositions ('resonate with').

× Of course I'm listen listen the many singers and it also give me relaxing feel when I get low and I mostly prefer the wrappers it give me full of beans for my work.

✓ Of course, I listen to many singers, and it also makes me feel relaxed when I'm feeling low. I mostly prefer rappers; they give me energy for my work.

'I'm listen listen' is wrong; use 'I listen to'. 'the many singers' should be 'many singers'. 'it also give' needs third-person singular 'gives' or 'makes' with 'me feel relaxed'. 'When I get low' better 'when I'm feeling low'. 'wrappers' is misspelling of 'rappers'. 'full of beans' is informal; 'give me energy' is clearer. Suggestion: Use 'listen to', correct verb forms, and correct vocabulary 'rappers'.

× No I don't took a any singing class as these all singing is my own original and I'm singing by my hobby and it's not my profession.

✓ No, I haven't taken any singing classes; all my singing is original, and I sing as a hobby, not as a profession.

'Don't took' mixes present negative with past participle; use present perfect 'haven't taken'. 'a any' is redundant. 'these all singing is my own original' is ungrammatical; use 'all my singing is original'. 'I'm singing by my hobby' should be 'I sing as a hobby'. Suggestion: Use 'haven't taken any singing classes', 'I sing as a hobby', and correct noun phrases.

× I'm sing by my heart only.

✓ I sing from my heart only.

'I'm sing' mixes auxiliary with base verb; should be simple present 'I sing' for habitual action. 'by my heart' is incorrect preposition; use 'from my heart'. Suggestion: Use 'I sing from my heart' or 'I sing with all my heart.'