Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Keep it under 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing. I have loved it since childhood because singing relaxes me and lifts my mood. For example, when I sing after a stressful day, I feel calmer and more energetic.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use past tense consistently, and give specific details about what you learned and when. Use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I learned music at school. I took harmonium lessons in primary school and later learned basic guitar to accompany my singing. In addition, I practiced with classmates during music class.

Suggestion: Be clearer and more realistic. Start with a simple topic sentence, then explain motives with specific examples. Avoid contradictory or unclear statements. Keep to two or three concise sentences.

Example: I would like to sing for general audiences, especially people who haven’t heard me before. I hope to win them over with my performances; for instance, I would sing at local events to build confidence and gain fans.

Suggestion: Answer directly and support with a clear reason and example. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'comfort', 'relieve stress') and avoid repetition. One or two supporting sentences are enough.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music often comforts people and reduces stress. For example, when I listen to a favorite song after a hard day, it cheers me up and helps me relax.

× I like singing very much since I was I've, I'm from childhood because when I sing a song, I feel very, very much, uh, pleasant, uh, very much happy.

✓ I have liked singing very much since I was a child because when I sing a song, I feel very happy and pleasant.

The student used simple present 'I like' with 'since' which requires present perfect to show an action starting in the past and continuing to the present. 'since I was I've, I'm from childhood' is ungrammatical; use 'since I was a child.' Redundant phrases 'very, very much' and misplaced 'pleasant' should be simplified. Suggestion: use present perfect 'have liked' with 'since' and replace awkward phrases with concise adjectives. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× Yes, when I'm studying in school at school I learn playing harmonium to sing a song.

✓ Yes, when I was studying at school I learned to play the harmonium to sing songs.

The original mixes present progressive 'I'm studying' with a past context; use past tense 'was studying' for past time. 'I learn playing' is incorrect verb structure; use 'learned to play'. Also 'at school' is duplicated and 'harmonium' takes the definite or no article depending, but 'the harmonium' is natural. Suggestion: use past tense consistently and the infinitive 'to play.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× So basically from school also learn to play a guitar for to help to sing a song.

✓ So basically at school I also learned to play the guitar to help me sing.

Preposition 'from school' is awkward for the meaning; 'at school' is better. 'learn to play a guitar' should be 'learned to play the guitar' and 'for to help to sing a song' is incorrect; use 'to help me sing.' Remove redundant 'a' before 'guitar' when using the general noun with 'the guitar.' Suggestion: simplify the purpose clause with 'to help me sing.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× I want to sing for many people's who don't know me, who don't like me.

✓ I want to sing for many people who don't know me or who don't like me.

The phrase 'people's' is a possessive form incorrectly used; use 'people' (plural noun). Also combine relative clauses with 'or' for clarity. Suggestion: remove incorrect apostrophe and use 'people' and correct conjunction. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× I want to show them I can sing and they love me.

✓ I want to show them that I can sing and that they will love me.

The original omits 'that' which is acceptable but the tense meaning is unclear; 'they love me' suggests present habitual rather than the intended future response. Use 'will love me' to indicate expected reaction. Suggestion: add 'that' for clarity and use future to express expected result. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Basically I want to become a singer but not not possible.

✓ Basically I want to become a singer, but it may not be possible.

The phrase 'not not possible' is ungrammatical (double negative) and lacks a subject. Insert 'it may' to make a clear statement about possibility. Suggestion: avoid double negatives and include a subject and modal to express uncertainty. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× But also I understand. I've been looking for.

✓ But I understand that; I have been looking for opportunities.

The fragment 'I've been looking for.' lacks an object. Also 'But also I understand' is awkward; use 'But I understand that' to connect ideas. Add the object 'opportunities' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: ensure verbs have necessary objects and linkers. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× Yes, sing song is a part of life.

✓ Yes, singing is a part of life.

'Sing song' is incorrect; use the gerund 'singing' to refer to the activity. No article is needed before 'singing.' Suggestion: use gerund forms to talk about activities. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× It's A to when you when you heard a song, your pain will relieve and you feel very good.

✓ When you hear a song, your pain is relieved and you feel very good.

The original has extra words 'It's A to when you when you heard a song' and mixes tenses. Use present simple 'hear' for general truth and passive 'is relieved' or 'your pain lessens' to express effect. 'Heard' (past) is inconsistent. Suggestion: remove filler words and use consistent present-tense statements for general facts. Grammar Problem Type ID: 16

× You feel very pleasant.

✓ You feel very pleased.

'Feel pleasant' is not the usual collocation; people 'feel pleased' or 'feel pleasant' is rarely used. Also if referring to general effect, present simple 'you feel' is fine. Suggestion: use 'pleased' or 'happy' to describe emotional states correctly. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× So singing, good singing makes you feel very, very pleasant.

✓ So singing, especially good singing, makes you feel very, very good.

'Feel very, very pleasant' is awkward; use 'feel very good' or 'feel very pleasant' with less redundancy. Also insert commas to modify 'good singing.' Maintain present simple for general truths. Suggestion: prefer natural collocations like 'feel good' or 'feel happy.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 6