Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid unrelated words, and use concise reasons. Improve grammar (use correct verb forms and sentence structure) and replace vague phrases with specific explanations. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding a reason.

Example: I don't really enjoy singing because I feel my voice is not pleasant enough compared with trained singers. Also, I get nervous about singing in public, so I prefer listening to music rather than performing.

Suggestion: Start with a direct yes/no and give brief specific reasons. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "learn to sing") and connect ideas with linking words like "because" and "so." Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing.

Example: No, I have never learned to sing. I never took lessons because I feel uncomfortable singing in front of others and I worry that my voice is unclear, so I never practiced formally.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence naming the people and add a brief specific reason using linking words like "because" or "so." Keep it natural and avoid conditional awkwardness (use "I would sing for").

Example: I would sing for my parents and close friends because I want to cheer them up and show my appreciation. For example, I might sing a simple happy song at a family gathering to make them smile.

Suggestion: Answer directly then support with two clear, specific reasons linked by cohesive devices (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid unclear phrases like "hobby of thinking"—replace with concrete ideas such as "hobby of singing" or "enjoyment."

Example: Yes, I do. Singing can lift people's mood because it helps them release stress and express emotions. For example, many people sing along to music after a long day to feel happier and more relaxed.

× Well, I don't really like much thinking as I think my voice is not sweet as compared to singers and many more.

✓ Well, I don't really like singing much because I think my voice is not as sweet as singers'.

The original uses 'thinking' instead of 'singing' (word choice) and awkward comparative phrasing. Use 'singing much' (adverb placement) and the correct comparative structure 'not as sweet as singers'' with possessive apostrophe to compare voices. Suggestions: replace 'thinking' with 'singing', place 'much' after the verb, and use 'not as ... as' plus possessive for 'singers'.

× I didn't get any chance to learn sing as I don't as I think I don't like to prefer sing in front of many people or I also think that my voice is not clear that's why I didn't learn anything.

✓ I didn't get a chance to learn to sing because I don't like singing in front of many people, and I also think my voice is not clear, so I didn't learn.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and mixed tenses. Use infinitive 'to learn to sing'. Use simple past consistently for past action 'didn't get' and present 'don't like' for current dislike. Remove repeated words and fix coordination: 'because' links cause and effect; 'so' indicates result. Suggestions: use 'a chance' (article), 'learn to sing' (infinitive), 'singing' (gerund) after 'like', and clear clause connectors.

× Uh, if I would like to sing for, I would like to sing for my mom, my friend and my dad, 'cause I always love them and sing for them to make them happy.

✓ If I could sing for someone, I would like to sing for my mom, my friend, and my dad because I love them and want to make them happy.

Conditional phrasing is incorrect: use 'If I could sing for someone' or 'If I were to sing'. 'Would like to sing for' is fine but avoid 'if I would'. Use 'because' instead of informal ''cause'. Use 'want to make them happy' for clarity and parallel structure. Suggestions: use correct conditional form and coherent verb choices.

× Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to most of the people 'cause most people like to sing as their way of releasing their stress and some people have hobby of thinking.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to most people because many people sing to relieve stress, and some people have it as a hobby.

'Most of the people' is wordy; 'most people' is preferred. 'Because' instead of ''cause'. 'Like to sing as their way of releasing their stress' is awkward—use 'sing to relieve stress'. 'Some people have hobby of thinking' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'have it as a hobby'. Suggestions: use natural quantifiers ('most people', 'many people'), concise expressions ('relieve stress'), and correct noun phrase 'have it as a hobby'.

× So I think singing can bring happiness in their life.

✓ So I think singing can bring happiness to their lives.

Preposition error and noun number: 'bring happiness in their life' should be 'bring happiness to their lives'. Use plural 'lives' to agree with 'their'. Also 'bring happiness to' is standard collocation. Suggestions: use correct preposition 'to' and pluralize 'lives' when referring to multiple people.