Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、语法更准确，并在首句直接回应。避免冗长或不完整的句子，控制在不超过五句。可以加一两句具体例子或场景来丰富内容，并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions. For example, when I'm happy I sing upbeat songs, and when I'm sad I prefer slow ballads to calm myself. Singing also helps me connect with others, so I often sing with friends at small gatherings.

Suggestion: 注意时态和语法一致性，避免混用结构。第一句用简单过去时说明经历，第二句用完整句子解释原因或背景，并使用连接词衔接。可提供具体细节如上课频率或学到的技巧。

Example: Yes, I took singing lessons when I was a child. My mother also loved singing, so she encouraged me to practise twice a week. During lessons I learnt breath control and basic vocal techniques, which helped build my confidence.

Suggestion: 回答明确且自然，但可以更具体说明场合或原因，用连接词扩展一两句。例如说明在何时为他们唱歌（庆祝活动或日常），以及唱歌时想传达的情感。保持句子简短有力。

Example: I would like to sing for my close family and friends because I feel grateful for their support. For instance, I often sing for them at birthday parties or family dinners to show appreciation and create a warm atmosphere.

Suggestion: 句子结构有重复和冗余，要简洁表达观点并用链接词给出理由或例子。避免重复同义词，说明如何带来快乐（例如通过节奏、歌词或社交场合）。控制在三到四句内。

Example: Yes, I think singing can make people feel happy and relaxed because music often lifts the mood and reduces stress. For example, singing cheerful songs at gatherings helps people bond, while singing softly can soothe someone who is anxious.

× I'm really enjoying singing because I consider singing can express my emotion.

✓ I'm really enjoying singing because I consider that singing can express my emotions.

句子中“consider”后需要连接词或从句结构，常用结构是 consider that + 从句；另外“emotion”在此处指复数的情感，应使用复数形式“emotions”。建议在“consider”后加“that”，并把“emotion”改为“emotions”。

× Yes, I'm actually have taken singing lessons when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I actually took singing lessons when I was a kid.

原句中同时出现了现在完成时的助动词结构和一般过去时间状语“when I was a kid”，时态不一致。应使用一般过去时“took”来与过去时间状语一致，并将“I'm actually have taken”改为“I actually took”。

× My mom know and like singing.

✓ My mom knows and likes singing.

主语“My mom”是第三人称单数，谓语动词须加第三人称单数形式“-s”。因此“know”和“like”应改为“knows”和“likes”。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

该句语法本身无误。该问题为提问句，动词形式正确，因而无需修改。此处列出以表明已检查第三人称单数问题并确认无错误。

× I would like to sing for my close family and friends because I feel grateful to them.

✓ I would like to sing for my close family and friends because I feel grateful to them.

该句时态和用法恰当（“would like”表达愿望，后半句用现在时表达感受），无需改动。特此说明以表明已检查现在时问题并确认无错误。

× Yes, I do think can not only bring happiness to people but also make people feel happy and relaxed.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can not only bring happiness to people but also make them feel happy and relaxed.

原句缺少主语，短语“can not only bring...”前应有动作主语（如“singing”）。此外，后半句重复“people”可简化为代词“them”。建议在句首补入“singing”并将第二个“people”改为“them”。