Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更直接并注意语法与连贯性。可先用一句简短的主题句回答（例如“Yes, I do.”），然后用一到两句具体原因和一个简短例子支持。避免重复表达（like music / like singing 两次），并修正语法（help me happy → make me happy; when I stretch out and class → when I’m stretching or in class）。在句子之间用连接词（because, so, for example）确保逻辑流畅。

Example: Yes, I do. I’m a voice major, so I love music and singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood. For example, when I’m stretching in class I often hum a song to calm myself and prepare for practice.

Suggestion: 回答要更简洁并纠正专业表达与语法。先用一句肯定句，然后补充具体信息（学校、专业、学过哪些课程或技能）。避免犹豫词（umm）并用连接词（because, so）让信息更清晰。

Example: Yes, I have. I study at university majoring in vocal performance, so I take regular singing classes where I learn technique, repertoire and stage performance.

Suggestion: 回答需更明确并修正人称错误（he → they）。先回答明确对象（e.g. my parents），然后给一到两条具体原因或例子，避免重复和填充词（umm, uh）。例如说明父母喜欢你的声音或你为他们演唱的场合。

Example: Mostly for my parents. They enjoy listening to my singing, especially during family gatherings, and I like to sing for them to cheer them up or share new songs I’ve learned.

Suggestion: 回答要更有条理并用具体原因说明“为什么”。去掉重复（I think）和犹豫词（umm）。说明唱歌如何影响情绪（e.g. reduce stress, improve mood），并给出一个简短例子或情境。注意语法和词汇（bring the more power → give people energy or comfort; make their to come → help them relax）。

Example: Yes, I do. Singing can improve people’s mood and reduce stress, for example, when someone feels anxious they often sing a calm song to relax and feel more positive.

× Singing can help me happy and make me feel more relaxed and when I stretch out and class I will sing the song to.

✓ Singing can help me be happy and make me feel more relaxed, and when I relax in class I will sing a song too.

句中 "help me happy" 缺少動詞形式，正確用法是 "help someone (to) do" 或 "help someone be..."。此外 "stretch out and class" 結構混亂，應為 "relax in class"；"sing the song to" 不符合英語慣用，改為 "sing a song too"。建議記住動詞搭配：help + 宾语 + (to) + 原形動詞，並使用正確介詞短語（in class）。（简体中文）

× Yes, because I'm a voice singer so I think I really like music and I really like singing.

✓ Yes, because I'm a singer, so I really like music and I really like singing.

原句中 "a voice singer" 是不自然的表達，應使用常見名詞 "singer"。時態無誤，但詞語搭配需要修正。建議使用常見職業名詞並簡化重複表達。（简体中文）

× Have you ever learnt how to sing? Student: Yes, because I'm a student in the university and my major is umm, pro performance voice, and I need to learn how to sing in the class, so yeah.

✓ Yes. I'm a university student and my major is professional vocal performance, so I need to learn how to sing in class.

原句中 "a student in the university" 建議改為更自然的 "a university student"；"pro performance voice" 不是正確的專業名稱，應為 "professional vocal performance" 或 "vocal performance"。去掉冗餘連詞並使句子更簡潔以符合現在時表述。建議學習常見專業名稱及名詞短語順序。（简体中文）

× Umm, sometimes maybe my parents because umm, my parents love to hear my voice and he love to umm, then they love to uh, hear what I want to sing Yeah, so.

✓ Sometimes maybe my parents, because my parents love to hear my voice, and they love to hear what I want to sing.

原句使用了錯誤的人稱代詞 "he"，應與主語 "my parents" 對應為複數代詞 "they"。同時句子有冗長重複，應簡化以保持清晰。建議注意代詞與先行詞的數一致（單複數一致）。（简体中文）

× Yes, I think because I think umm, singing can bring the more power, uh, for the people when the people need to calm down, umm, they can sing the soft music and make their to come, yeah.

✓ Yes, I think singing can give people more strength. When people need to calm down, they can sing soft songs and feel better.

原句時態雖多為現在時，但表達不自然且有結構性錯誤："bring the more power" 應為 "give people more strength" 或 "bring more power to people"；"sing the soft music" 應為 "sing soft songs"；"make their to come" 無意義，應改為 "feel better" 或 "become calm"。建議使用簡潔的現在時陳述，避免冗語並注意固定搭配（give someone strength / sing soft songs）。（简体中文）