Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and happy. Whenever I sing my favorite songs, I feel less stressed and more cheerful.

Suggestion: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually sing by listening to songs on the Internet and trying to imitate them.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng.

Example: I prefer to sing for myself because I am not confident singing in front of others. Singing alone makes me feel comfortable and happy.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời đúng ý nhưng câu trả lời còn dài dòng và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Example: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy their favorite songs. Moreover, singing can improve their skills and boost their confidence.

× I realized singing because when I singing I feels very relaxed when I sing uh, many song I love. Yes.

✓ I realized singing because when I sing I feel very relaxed. I love many songs. Yes.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'when I'; it should be the base form 'sing' to match the present tense. Also, 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'Many song' should be plural 'many songs'. Suggestions: Use base verb form after 'when' for present tense actions and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× No, I don't learn how to sing. I sing when my mom song then and uh sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing. I sing when my mom sings and uh sing.

The phrase 'don't learn' is incorrect for past experience; 'haven't learned' is appropriate. 'My mom song' should be 'my mom sings' to use the correct present tense third person singular form. Suggestions: Use present perfect for past experiences and correct verb forms for third person singular.

× I listen many song in Internet so I copy that.

✓ I listen to many songs on the Internet so I copy them.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Many song' should be plural 'many songs'. 'In Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. 'That' referring to songs should be 'them'. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions with verbs and plural forms for countable nouns.

× I don't want to save for everyone, I want to save for me because I don't confident in many people.

✓ I don't want to sing for everyone, I want to sing for myself because I am not confident in front of many people.

'Save' is incorrect; it should be 'sing'. 'For me' should be 'for myself' to use the correct reflexive pronoun. 'I don't confident' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not confident'. Suggestions: Use correct verbs, reflexive pronouns, and verb 'to be' forms.

× Yes and when I singing I want to me listening because is.

✓ Yes, and when I am singing I want to listen to myself because it is.

'When I singing' should be 'when I am singing' to use present continuous tense. 'I want to me listening' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to listen to myself'. 'Because is' is incomplete; 'because it is' is better. Suggestions: Use correct continuous tense and verb forms with prepositions.

× Of course, singing can bring happiness to many people, because when singing, people can feel relaxed and happy when they sing, when they sing their favorite song.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to many people because when they sing, people can feel relaxed and happy when they sing their favorite songs.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'when singing' is better clarified as 'when they sing' for clarity. 'Favorite song' should be plural 'favorite songs' to match 'many people'. Suggestions: Use clear subject references and plural forms for multiple people.

× Uh, and then. People can improve, they sell their skill. And yes, I think so.

✓ Uh, and then people can improve their skills. Yes, I think so.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect phrase 'they sell their skill'. It should be 'people can improve their skills'. Suggestions: Combine fragments into complete sentences and use correct vocabulary.