Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I think' twice, you can say 'because I love the music, rhythm, and melody, and people often say my voice is sharp and nice.'

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy singing because I love the music, rhythm, and melody. Moreover, people often say my voice is sharp and pleasant, which motivates me to sing often.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases like 'I think my brother, not brother.' Use linking words to organize your answer logically. For example, say 'I haven't formally learned to sing, but my mother taught me when I was young, and I have also learned from the Internet.'

Example: No, I have never formally learned to sing. However, my mother taught me when I was young, and I have also learned some techniques from the Internet. Since then, I have been singing on my own.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and avoid filler words like 'uh' and vague phrases like 'all those things.' Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. For example, say 'I want to sing for myself because I enjoy melodies and music, and I am learning basic techniques to improve.'

Example: I want to sing for myself because I really enjoy melodies and music. Therefore, I am learning some basic techniques to improve my singing skills.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. For example, instead of 'some relax and free feelings,' say 'a sense of relaxation and freedom.' Also, connect your ideas with words like 'for example' and 'therefore.'

Example: Definitely. Singing can bring a sense of relaxation and freedom. For example, when people feel sad, they can sing or listen to songs, which helps them feel better emotionally.

× I think people saying that my voice is very sharp and nice, so I like to sing all the time.

✓ I think people say that my voice is very sharp and nice, so I like to sing all the time.

The original sentence uses 'people saying' which is incorrect because 'people' is plural and requires the base form of the verb 'say' to form a correct present tense statement. Using 'saying' here is a gerund form and does not fit the sentence structure. The correct form is 'people say'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper verb form usage.

× No, never. I haven't learned how to sing, but from my young age I am singing.

✓ No, never. I haven't learned how to sing, but since my young age I have been singing.

The phrase 'from my young age I am singing' is incorrect because it mixes past time reference with present continuous tense. The correct expression is 'since my young age I have been singing' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. This uses the present perfect continuous tense appropriately.

× I think my brother, not brother. Actually, my mother told me how to sing when I was young, so I learned from her and after all I learned from some Internet and all those things, then I'm singing by my.

✓ I think my brother, no, not brother. Actually, my mother told me how to sing when I was young, so I learned from her and after that I learned from the Internet and all those things, then I sing by myself.

The phrase 'then I'm singing by my' is incorrect because 'by my' is an incomplete and incorrect pronoun usage. The correct phrase is 'I sing by myself' to indicate doing something alone. Also, 'some Internet' is incorrect; 'the Internet' is the proper noun. The correction improves pronoun usage and article usage.

× Actually, I really enjoy singing because the I like the melodies and music, all those things and I want to improve myself.

✓ Actually, I really enjoy singing because I like the melodies and music, all those things, and I want to improve myself.

The phrase 'because the I like' contains an unnecessary definite article 'the' before the pronoun 'I'. Pronouns do not require articles. Removing 'the' corrects the sentence.

× I think when we are singing we get some relax and free feelings.

✓ I think when we are singing we get some relaxed and free feelings.

The word 'relax' is a verb, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'feelings'. The correct adjective is 'relaxed'. This correction changes the verb to the appropriate adjective form to properly modify 'feelings'.

× So it is very emotional thing.

✓ So it is a very emotional thing.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'thing'. Adding 'a' corrects the article usage and makes the sentence grammatically correct.