Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, tránh lỗi như 'I singing' thay vì 'I sing'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'blow up my steam' (nên là 'blow off steam'). Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và đúng ngữ pháp.

Example: Yes, I like singing, especially when I do household chores. I sing loudly alone because it makes me feel comfortable and confident. Moreover, singing helps me to relax and relieve stress after a long day.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'I singing' nên là 'I sing'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I have learned a little about singing. Sometimes, I watch videos on the Internet to pick up singing tips. Also, I sing with my friends because it helps us relax and enjoy our free time. If I have a chance, I would like to learn how to sing properly.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I can comfortable' nên là 'I feel comfortable'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi 'Who do you want to sing for?'

Example: I usually sing with my friends because it helps us relax after a long day. Singing with them makes me feel comfortable and confident to express my emotions. Sometimes, I also learn new tips from them.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác, ví dụ 'attract many passenger' nên là 'attracted many passersby'. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, có liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For example, during the holiday, my friends and I sang loudly on the street, which attracted many passersby and created a joyful atmosphere. Singing together not only made me feel happy but also helped us connect with others and share positive energy.

× I singing alone loudly because I feel comfortable and confident, Uh, and it's a good way to me to blow up my steam and relax so long.

✓ I sing alone loudly because I feel comfortable and confident, and it's a good way for me to blow off my steam and relax for a long time.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used here; the base form 'sing' should be used after 'I'. Also, 'blow up my steam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'blow off my steam'. Additionally, 'to me' should be 'for me', and 'relax so long' should be 'relax for a long time' to express duration properly.

× I singing alone loudly because I feel comfortable and confident, Uh, and it's a good way to me to blow up my steam and relax so long.

✓ I sing alone loudly because I feel comfortable and confident, and it's a good way for me to blow off my steam and relax for a long time.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'way'; the correct preposition is 'for'. Also, 'blow up my steam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'blow off my steam'. 'Relax so long' should be 'relax for a long time' to indicate duration.

× Uh, I have learned how to sing a little bit.

✓ Uh, I have learned how to sing a little bit.

No correction needed here; the present perfect tense 'have learned' is appropriate to indicate experience up to now.

× Sometime I watch video on the Internet, I pick up some singing tips and also I singing together with my friends that because it helps us realize and enjoy our free time.

✓ Sometimes I watch videos on the Internet, I pick up some singing tips and also I sing together with my friends because it helps us relax and enjoy our free time.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple instances. 'I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing'. 'That because' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'Realize' is incorrect in this context; 'relax' fits better.

× Sometime I watch video on the Internet, I pick up some singing tips and also I singing together with my friends that because it helps us realize and enjoy our free time.

✓ Sometimes I watch videos on the Internet, I pick up some singing tips and also I sing together with my friends because it helps us relax and enjoy our free time.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used; the base form 'sing' should be used after 'I'.

× Sometime I watch video on the Internet, I pick up some singing tips and also I singing together with my friends that because it helps us realize and enjoy our free time.

✓ Sometimes I watch videos on the Internet, I pick up some singing tips and also I sing together with my friends because it helps us relax and enjoy our free time.

'That because' is an incorrect conjunction; it should be simply 'because' to connect the clauses properly.

× But if I have a chance, I want to learn how to sing it properly.

✓ But if I have a chance, I want to learn how to sing properly.

'Sing it properly' is awkward; 'sing properly' is the correct form. The verb 'sing' should be in base form without 'it'.

× But if I have a chance, I want to learn how to sing it properly.

✓ But if I have a chance, I want to learn how to sing properly.

'It' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'sing' is an action verb that does not require an object pronoun in this context.

× I usually sing with my friends because after a long day we have a singing lesson to relax and form of steam and uh, when I sing with them, I can comfortable and confident to express my emotion and so on.

✓ I usually sing with my friends because after a long day we have a singing lesson to relax and release steam, and when I sing with them, I can feel comfortable and confident to express my emotions and so on.

'Form of steam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'release steam'. 'Comfortable' and 'confident' are adjectives and need the verb 'feel' before them. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context.

× I can comfortable and confident to express my emotion and so on.

✓ I can feel comfortable and confident to express my emotions and so on.

'Comfortable' and 'confident' are adjectives and cannot be used directly after 'can' without a verb like 'feel'.

× I sometimes I pick up some tips from them and.

✓ Sometimes I pick up some tips from them.

The sentence has a redundant 'I' and ends abruptly with 'and.' It should be corrected to a complete sentence without redundancy.

× For example, during the dead holiday, my friends and I sang loudly on the street, which attract many passenger and create a joyful atmosphere.

✓ For example, during the dead holiday, my friends and I sang loudly on the street, which attracted many passengers and created a joyful atmosphere.

The verbs 'attract' and 'create' should be in past tense 'attracted' and 'created' to agree with the past tense 'sang'. 'Passenger' should be plural 'passengers'.

× which attract many passenger and create a joyful atmosphere.

✓ which attracted many passengers and created a joyful atmosphere.

'Passenger' should be plural 'passengers' because it refers to multiple people.

× Uh, singing together not only made me feel happy but also have us connect with others and share positive energies so.

✓ Singing together not only made me feel happy but also helped us connect with others and share positive energy.

'Have us connect' is incorrect; it should be 'helped us connect'. 'Positive energies' is better as 'positive energy' in this context.