Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons or examples. For instance, instead of repeating 'singing' multiple times, say 'I enjoy singing because it has been my favorite hobby since childhood, and I aspire to become a music producer.'

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it has been my favorite hobby since I was a child. I want to become a music producer someday, so I practice singing regularly to improve my skills, even though I am not fully satisfied with my voice yet.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid unnecessary repetition. Begin with a direct answer, then provide specific details using linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child by attending a music school, which helped me gain experience and increased my love for singing.'

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child by attending a music school. This experience gave me opportunities to perform in shows, which made me love singing even more.

Suggestion: Clarify your answer by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain your idea clearly and avoid filler words. For example, say 'I want to sing for artists, especially in Samoa, because recording demos is an important part of the music process. I am learning to sing to help these artists with their songs.'

Example: I want to sing for artists, particularly those in Samoa, because creating demos is a crucial step in producing songs. By improving my singing skills, I can support these artists with their music projects.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent and avoid irrelevant phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons. For example, say 'Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel relaxed, which improves their mood.'

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and helps them feel more relaxed. This positive effect can improve overall well-being.

× I like singing, singing very much.

✓ I like singing very much.

The repetition of 'singing' is unnecessary and incorrect. The correct form is to say 'I like singing very much.' without repeating the word.

× It's my favorite hobby because I wanna be producer.

✓ It's my favorite hobby because I want to be a producer.

The pronoun 'I' is correct, but 'wanna' is informal and 'be producer' lacks an article. The correct form is 'I want to be a producer.' with the article 'a' before 'producer'.

× I always singing uh, for my childhood it my umm, my favorite hobby.

✓ I have always been singing since my childhood; it has been my favorite hobby.

The verb 'singing' needs an auxiliary verb to form the present perfect continuous tense. Also, 'for my childhood' is incorrect; 'since my childhood' is appropriate. The sentence is corrected to express continuous action from the past to present.

× I like it so much, but I don't like my voice and I hope that I can sing more beautiful there.

✓ I like it so much, but I don't like my voice, and I hope that I can sing more beautifully.

The adverb 'beautifully' should be used instead of the adjective 'beautiful' to modify the verb 'sing'. Also, 'there' is unnecessary and confusing in this context.

× Yeah, I have ever ever learned how to sing when I was child and my childhood I go to musical school to know how to sing.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing when I was a child, and during my childhood, I went to a music school to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'have ever ever learned' is incorrect; 'have learned' suffices. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a'. 'I go' should be past tense 'I went'. 'Musical school' is better as 'music school'. 'To know how to sing' should be 'to learn how to sing'.

× I have a any experience, any umm showings when I uh sitting and it's make me more loving for singing.

✓ I have some experience and have performed in some shows when I was sitting, and it made me love singing more.

'A any' is incorrect; 'some' is appropriate. 'Showings' is incorrect; 'shows' is better. 'When I uh sitting' is unclear; likely 'when I was sitting' or 'when I was performing'. 'It's make' should be 'it made'. 'More loving for singing' should be 'love singing more'.

× I wanna sing to my artists, uh, like in Samoa, uh, for their uh, songs because uh, demo is so important part of song umm, I learn how to sing for my next artist.

✓ I want to sing for my artists, like those in Samoa, for their songs because demos are an important part of songs. I am learning how to sing for my next artist.

'Sing to my artists' should be 'sing for my artists'. 'Demo' should be plural 'demos'. 'Is so important part' needs 'an' before 'important part'. 'I learn' should be 'I am learning' to indicate ongoing action.

× Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing, you can improve all your feelings and it's make you more relaxed.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing, it can improve your feelings and make you more relaxed.

'It's make' is incorrect; it should be 'it can make' or 'it makes'. Also, 'improve all your feelings' is better as 'improve your feelings'.

× It can be so good for you. Like it's like like Ipsy. Hello, dear.

✓ It can be very good for you. Like, it's like therapy. Hello, dear.

The phrase 'like it's like like Ipsy' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. Assuming the intended word is 'therapy', which fits the context. The sentence is corrected for clarity.