Part 1
Examiner
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidate
Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and forget some worries, although I'm not a good singer.
Examiner
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidate
No, I don't learned how to sing. I always sing with myself.
Examiner
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidate
I want to sing for my idol and my friends. I really love them.
Examiner
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidate
Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people, and I think singing can bring hopes to people too.
Do you like singing? Why?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较自然且表达了个人感受,但句子结构稍显简单,且“although I'm not a good singer”部分可以更流畅地表达。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词,使表达更连贯。
Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and take my mind off worries, even though I'm not very skilled at it.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 语法错误明显,如“don't learned”应为“haven't learned”。表达不够自然,且“sing with myself”不符合英语习惯,建议改为“I usually sing by myself”。
Example: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. I usually sing by myself for fun.
Who do you want to sing for?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答直接,但缺乏细节和连接词。建议补充原因或情感描述,使回答更丰富和连贯。
Example: I want to sing for my idol and my friends because they inspire me and I want to show my appreciation for their support.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答重复使用“I think”,显得冗余。建议使用连接词和多样化表达,增加具体细节。
Example: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions, and it can also inspire hope during difficult times.
× No, I don't learned how to sing.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.
这里使用了助动词'do'的否定形式'don't',但后面动词却用了过去式'learned',这是错误的。正确的表达应该用现在完成时'haven't learned',表示到目前为止没有学过。建议使用现在完成时态来表达过去发生并持续到现在的动作。