Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. For example, say 'Singing helps me relax and unwind.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing. I was part of my high school's choir, which helped me improve my skills. Singing helps me relax and unwind after a busy day.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'When I was in high school, our music teacher taught us how to pronounce words correctly and use our mouth properly to produce sounds, which was very helpful.'

Example: Yes, I learnt singing in high school. Our music teacher taught us how to pronounce words clearly and use our mouth correctly to produce sounds, which was very helpful.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct response, then explain your reason using linking words. For example, 'I like to sing for myself because it makes me feel more confident. Therefore, I believe singing is a personal experience rather than for others.'

Example: I usually sing for myself because it boosts my confidence. So, I think singing is more about personal enjoyment than performing for others.

Suggestion: Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, 'Absolutely. When people perform songs like pop or funky music on the street, it can lift others' moods and convey positive messages.'

Example: Absolutely. When people perform songs like pop or funky music on the street, it can lift others' moods and convey positive messages, bringing happiness to many.

× I feel singing is make me relax and chill at that time.

✓ I feel singing makes me relax and chill at that time.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue (ID 27). Also, 'is make' is incorrect; the correct form is 'makes'.

× I've learned how to sing in my high school when I joined the child the our music teacher teach how to pronounce, how to use mouth to pronounce the sound.

✓ I learned how to sing in my high school when I joined the choir. Our music teacher taught us how to pronounce and how to use the mouth to produce the sound.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'I've learned' is acceptable but 'I learned' fits better with the past event. 'Joined the child the our music teacher teach' is incorrect; it should be 'joined the choir. Our music teacher taught'. 'Teach' should be in past tense 'taught' to match the past event. Also, 'how to use mouth' needs the article 'the' before 'mouth'. These are past tense issues (ID 5) and article usage (ID 22).

× I want to think for myself to singing is made me feel more confident when I singing.

✓ I want to think that singing makes me feel more confident when I sing.

The phrase 'think for myself to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'think that singing'. 'Is made me' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me'. 'When I singing' should be 'when I sing'. These are issues with pronoun use and verb forms (IDs 12 and 27).

× So I do think singing is for myself is not for another one.

✓ So I do think singing is for myself and not for anyone else.

'For myself' is acceptable but 'for another one' is incorrect; it should be 'for anyone else'. This is an incorrect pronoun usage (ID 12).

× When you walk down the street and see people around perform the singing are some songs like pop music or some funky music can make people feel more happy and bring up the emotion so music can leave some message.

✓ When you walk down the street and see people around performing songs like pop music or funky music, it can make people feel happier and bring up emotions, so music can leave a message.

The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect structure. 'Perform the singing are some songs' is incorrect; it should be 'performing songs'. 'More happy' should be 'happier' (comparative adjective). 'Bring up the emotion' should be 'bring up emotions'. 'Leave some message' should be 'leave a message'. These are sentence structure errors (ID 26), comparative errors (ID 25), and article errors (ID 22).