Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use more varied vocabulary. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it has been my hobby since childhood. It helps me relax and improves my mood whenever I feel stressed.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains redundancy. Use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid repeating similar phrases.

Example: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I often watch YouTube videos to learn new songs and get ideas.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question and explain briefly why, using clear and natural language.

Example: I usually sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and helps me pass the time.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others.

× Obviously, I like singing because it's my hobby to sing the song.

✓ Obviously, I like singing because it's my hobby to sing songs.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' because the hobby refers to singing songs in general, not just one specific song. In English, when talking about hobbies or general activities, plural form is often used.

× Since my childhood, I like singing.

✓ Since my childhood, I have liked singing.

The phrase 'Since my childhood' requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. 'I like' is simple present and does not fit this context.

× Singing makes me feel relaxed and so calm down whenever I am in a bad mood.

✓ Singing makes me feel relaxed and calm down whenever I am in a bad mood.

The conjunction 'and so' is incorrect here. 'And' alone is sufficient to connect the two ideas. 'So' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow.

× Actually, I haven't learned how to sing, but sometimes I watch many kinds of YouTube videos from which from where I can learn many new kinds of musics and I can take many ideas from there.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned how to sing, but sometimes I watch many kinds of YouTube videos from which I can learn many new kinds of music and I can take many ideas from there.

The word 'musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'from which from where' is redundant; only one preposition is needed.

× Actually, I haven't learned how to sing, but sometimes I watch many kinds of YouTube videos from which from where I can learn many new kinds of musics and I can take many ideas from there.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned how to sing, but sometimes I watch many kinds of YouTube videos from which I can learn many new kinds of music and I can take many ideas from there.

The phrase 'from which from where' is redundant and incorrect. Only one preposition should be used to maintain clarity and correctness.

× As I told you, I like to sing a song which is my hobby also.

✓ As I told you, I like to sing songs which is my hobby also.

The phrase 'a song' is singular but the context implies singing songs in general as a hobby, so 'songs' plural is more appropriate.

× I want to sing for myself which makes me feel good and it's a way of my time pass also.

✓ I want to sing for myself which makes me feel good and it's a way to pass my time also.

The phrase 'a way of my time pass' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a way to pass my time' or 'a way of passing my time'.

× Yeah, obviously I think singing can bring happiness to people, people because singing is the way of expressing any kinds of emotions to 1 to other ones.

✓ Yeah, obviously I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a way of expressing any kind of emotion to others.

The repetition of 'people' is unnecessary. 'Any kinds of emotions' should be 'any kind of emotion' because 'kind' is singular and 'emotion' is uncountable or singular in this context. 'To 1 to other ones' is incorrect and should be 'to others'.