Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and correcting sentence structures. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I do not like singing,' you can say 'I don't usually like singing in public, but I do enjoy singing privately when I'm stressed.'

Example: No, I don't usually like singing in public because I feel shy. However, when I am stressed, I enjoy singing alone in the bathroom as it helps me relax.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to use varied vocabulary and correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: No, I have never learned how to sing, and I am not interested in learning because singing is not something I enjoy.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about the song or occasion. Also, try to reduce repetition.

Example: Although I don't usually sing, if I had the chance in the future, I would like to sing a special song for my parents, especially dedicating it to my father on his birthday.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more confidently and use linking words to organize your thoughts. Also, be more specific in your explanation.

Example: I believe singing can bring happiness to many people because it helps relieve stress. For example, when I feel stressed, I sing loudly, which calms me down and improves my mood.

× I never think about to sing a song in a platform or never think about to learn a scene.

✓ I never think about singing a song on a platform or learning a scene.

The verb 'think about' should be followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing), not the infinitive 'to sing' or 'to learn'. Also, 'on a platform' is the correct preposition here.

× I never think about to sing a song in a platform or never think about to learn a scene.

✓ I never think about singing a song on a platform or learning a scene.

The correct preposition to use with 'platform' is 'on', not 'in'. So, it should be 'on a platform'.

× Yeah, I like singing when I am very stressful and I am a bathroom singer.

✓ Yeah, I like singing when I am very stressed and I am a bathroom singer.

The adjective 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, but here the speaker wants to describe their own feeling, so 'stressed' is correct.

× No, I never learned how to sing and I do not want to learn how to sing because I don't have that much of interest in the singing and I would never think about to learn singing in my life.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing and I do not want to learn how to sing because I don't have much interest in singing and I would never think about learning to sing in my life.

The present perfect 'have never learned' is appropriate for life experiences. Also, 'much interest' is correct without 'that'. The phrase 'think about to learn' should be 'think about learning'.

× I would never think about to learn singing in my life.

✓ I would never think about learning to sing in my life.

After 'think about', the verb should be in gerund form 'learning'. Also, 'learning to sing' is the correct expression.

× As far as I know, I do not like to sing, but if I had that chance in future then I would like to sing for my family, especially for my parents.

✓ As far as I know, I do not like to sing, but if I have that chance in the future, then I would like to sing for my family, especially for my parents.

The conditional sentence refers to a possible future event, so 'if I have' (present simple) is correct, not 'if I had' (past subjunctive). Also, 'in the future' requires the definite article 'the'.

× if I had that chance in future then I would like to sing for my family

✓ if I have that chance in the future, then I would like to sing for my family

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article 'the'.

× So I dedicated that song to my father.

✓ So I dedicate that song to my father.

Since the context is about a future or habitual action, present tense 'dedicate' is more appropriate than past tense 'dedicated'.

× So just only one song.

✓ Just one song only.

The phrase 'just only' is redundant; 'just' or 'only' alone is sufficient. Also, the word order 'just one song only' is more natural.

× I think that that depends on the peoples to people, that is very, uh, but yeah, uh, most of the times, uh, singing can bring happiness to the people.

✓ I think that depends on the people; it is very subjective, but yeah, most of the time, singing can bring happiness to people.

'Peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural noun. 'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time'. Also, 'depends on the people' is clearer than 'depends on the peoples to people'.

× As I know for myself when I'm very stressful, I just loudly speak, uh, sing a song and it gives me a calm.

✓ As I know for myself, when I'm very stressed, I just loudly sing a song and it calms me.

'Stressful' should be 'stressed' to describe the speaker's feeling. 'Speak' is unnecessary here. 'Gives me a calm' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'calms me'.