Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋用詞唔準確，例如「emotional」應該係「emotions」，「seeing」應該係「singing」。建議你用更準確嘅詞語同埋簡潔嘅句子結構，避免重複同冗長。

Example: I like singing because it helps me express my emotions. When I feel happy, singing makes me more enthusiastic, and when I am sad, it encourages me to feel better.

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤，例如「find the seeing Blogger」應該係「found a singing blogger」。另外，句子有啲冗長，建議用連接詞令句子更流暢。

Example: I have learned to sing by myself. I created a study plan using the SMART strategy and found a singing blogger on the Internet, such as on YouTube and Bilibili, to follow his instructions.

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有啲語法同用詞錯誤，例如「Frank gathering」應該係「friend gatherings」。句子結構唔夠清晰，建議用更直接嘅句子回應問題，並用連接詞令內容更連貫。

Example: I like to sing for my friends during gatherings. They often choose me to sing at karaoke, and I enjoy spending amazing time with them.

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤，例如「I fixing」應該係「I think singing」。內容唔夠清晰，建議用更具體嘅例子同埋清楚嘅句子表達意見。

Example: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, near my home, there is a band that sings, and when I listen to their songs, I feel happier and more peaceful.

× I like singing because singing can help me to express my emotional.

✓ I like singing because singing can help me to express my emotions.

'Emotional' is an adjective, but here a noun is needed to indicate feelings. The correct noun form is 'emotions'. 我哋需要用名詞'emotions'嚟表示感受，而唔係形容詞'emotional'。

× When I feel happy, seeing can make me feel enthusiastic, but when I feel sad, seeing can encourage me to pick up myself.

✓ When I feel happy, singing can make me feel enthusiastic, but when I feel sad, singing can encourage me to pick myself up.

'Seeing' is a typo for 'singing'. Also, the reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly placed; the correct phrase is 'pick myself up'. 'seeing'係打錯字，應該係'singing'。另外，'pick up myself'嘅反身代詞用法錯誤，正確係'pick myself up'。

× I have learned singing by myself.

✓ I have learned to sing by myself.

The verb 'learn' is usually followed by 'to' plus base verb when indicating acquiring a skill. 'Learned singing' is less natural than 'learned to sing'. 學習某技能時，通常用'learned to + 動詞原形'，所以應該係'learned to sing'。

× I made a study plan based on the SMART strategy and find the seeing Blogger on the Internet, for example on the YouTube and Billy Billy and follow his instructions to learn things.

✓ I made a study plan based on the SMART strategy and found the singing blogger on the Internet, for example on YouTube and Bilibili, and followed his instructions to learn.

The verbs 'find' and 'follow' should be in past tense to match 'made'. 'Seeing' is a typo for 'singing'. 'YouTube' and 'Bilibili' are proper nouns and should not have 'the'. 動詞時態要一致，應該用過去式'found'同'followed'。'seeing'係打錯字，應該係'singing'。'YouTube'同'Bilibili'係專有名詞，唔需要加'the'。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

No grammatical error detected in this sentence. 呢句冇語法錯誤。

× I love to sing in karaoke because in the Frank gathering they always pick me, go to the karaoke and enjoy the amazing time.

✓ I love to sing in karaoke because at the friends' gathering they always pick me to go to karaoke and enjoy an amazing time.

'Frank gathering' is likely a typo for 'friends' gathering'. Prepositions corrected from 'in' to 'at'. Added 'to' before 'go'. 'The karaoke' changed to 'karaoke' without 'the'. Added article 'an' before 'amazing time'. 'Frank gathering'應該係'friends' gathering'嘅打錯字。介詞'in'改為'at'。'pick me go'應該係'pick me to go'。'the karaoke'唔需要'the'。'amazing time'前面加冠詞'an'。

× So I want to learn to sing and enjoy the time with my friends.

✓ So I want to learn to sing and enjoy time with my friends.

'The time' is less natural here; 'enjoy time' is more appropriate when referring to general enjoyment. 呢度用'enjoy time'會比'enjoy the time'自然啲。

× Yes, I fixing can bring happiness to people because there is a bad show near my home and when I listen to the song they sing at home I can feel more happy and peaceful.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because there is a band show near my home and when I listen to the songs they sing at home, I can feel happier and more peaceful.

'Fixing' is a typo for 'think'. 'Bad show' is likely 'band show'. 'Song' should be plural 'songs'. 'More happy' should be 'happier'. Added comma before 'I can feel'. 'fixing'係打錯字，應該係'think'。'bad show'應該係'band show'。'song'要用複數'songs'。'more happy'應該用比較級'happier'。句子中加逗號分隔。