Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'relaxing' at the end; it should be 'relax'.

Example: I don't like singing much because I am not confident in my voice. However, I enjoy listening to music, especially when I feel sad, as it helps to lift my mood and relax me.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrasing like 'go on the track for learning the music'. Try to respond directly and clearly, using simple and correct expressions. Also, avoid repeating phrases from previous answers unnecessarily.

Example: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't think I have a good singing voice.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant questions. Focus on answering the examiner's question directly with clear sentences. Avoid asking questions back and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually sing for my family when we are together. Although I don't sing very well, they enjoy it and it makes our time more fun.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same point. Also, use correct phrases like 'lift my mood' instead of 'hit up my mood'.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, when I feel stressed or sad, listening to music helps to lift my mood and relax me.

× I do not consider myself as a good singer.

✓ I do not consider myself a good singer.

In English, the verb 'consider' is followed directly by the object without the preposition 'as'. Using 'as' here is incorrect. The correct structure is 'consider myself a good singer'. This is a common mistake and should be avoided for proper grammar.

× music helps me to lift my mood and relaxing.

✓ music helps me to lift my mood and relax.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'relaxing' (a present participle) after 'helps me to'. The correct form is the base verb 'relax' because 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb. Using 'relaxing' here is grammatically incorrect.

× I never go on the track for learning the music.

✓ I never went on the track for learning the music.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Go' is present tense; the correct past tense form is 'went'. This aligns the verb tense with the time frame of the action.

× Mostly when we have a family together in that.

✓ Mostly, when we have the family together,

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding commas and the definite article 'the' before 'family' clarifies the meaning. The phrase 'in that' is unnecessary and confusing, so it is removed for better sentence structure.

× Is this place any game related to singing?

✓ Is this place related to any game about singing?

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Rearranging the words and adding 'about' improves clarity and grammatical correctness. The question now properly asks if the place is related to any singing game.

× In that case? I used to sing for them, but honestly speaking it was not a cup of tea for me.

✓ In that case, I used to sing for them, but honestly speaking, it was not a cup of tea for me.

The original has a question mark after 'In that case' which is incorrect. It should be a comma. Also, adding commas improves readability and sentence flow.

× as per my opinion, whenever I feel down, I listen to music which will hit up my mood

✓ in my opinion, whenever I feel down, I listen to music which lifts my mood

The phrase 'as per my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my opinion'. Also, 'hit up my mood' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'lifts my mood'. These corrections improve naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× and also when I am not in my mood and I am a stress of my work at the time.

✓ and also when I am not in the mood and I am stressed because of my work at that time.

The phrase 'not in my mood' should be 'not in the mood'. 'I am a stress of my work' is incorrect; it should be 'I am stressed because of my work'. These corrections fix pronoun and noun usage errors.

× For relaxing my mood I often listen to the music.

✓ To relax my mood, I often listen to music.

The phrase 'For relaxing my mood' is awkward; the correct infinitive form 'To relax my mood' is appropriate. Also, 'the music' is unnecessary here; 'music' without an article is correct in this context.