Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel refreshed and relieves my stress. Moreover, I often sing with my friends and family, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and sentence structure. Use past tense correctly and link your ideas logically. Avoid short, disconnected sentences.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was younger. During my school days, I practiced regularly, and I still enjoy singing as a hobby.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, correct prepositions and article usage will help.

Example: I want to sing for my family because they are very important to me. Usually, I sing songs during family functions for everyone's enjoyment.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and improve sentence coherence with linking words.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to individuals. When people sing, they feel stress-free and relaxed, especially at parties or functions. Moreover, singing allows us to express our feelings effectively.

× I often singing with my friends and family members.

✓ I often sing with my friends and family members.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'often'. After modal verbs or adverbs like 'often', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Hence, 'sing' is correct here.

× During my school I was practice regularly and still enjoy singing as a hobby.

✓ During my school days, I practiced regularly and still enjoy singing as a hobby.

The phrase 'was practice' is incorrect because 'practice' is a verb and needs to be in past tense 'practiced' without 'was'. Also, 'During my school' is incomplete; it should be 'During my school days' for clarity.

× Mostly in my family function I sing a song for enjoyment.

✓ Mostly in my family functions, I sing songs for enjoyment.

The phrase 'family function' should be plural 'family functions' to indicate multiple occasions. Also, 'a song' can be pluralized to 'songs' to generalize the activity.

× Yeah, singing bring happiness to individual.

✓ Yeah, singing brings happiness to individuals.

The verb 'bring' should be in third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to refer generally to people.

× When individual are singing they are feel stress free and relaxed in any parties or functions.

✓ When individuals are singing, they feel stress-free and relaxed at any parties or functions.

'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match the plural verb 'are'. 'Are feel' is incorrect; it should be 'they feel'. Also, 'in any parties' should be 'at any parties' as 'at' is the correct preposition for events.

× People prefer to singing because it's expressed our feelings.

✓ People prefer singing because it expresses our feelings.

After 'prefer', the base verb or gerund can be used, but 'to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'it's expressed' is incorrect; it should be 'it expresses' to match the present tense and subject.