Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas into one sentence.

Example: I like singing because it makes me happy and allows me to have fun with my family and friends.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid vague or confusing phrases.

Example: Yes, I have taken singing classes where I learned the basics of singing, including how to control my voice and improve my pitch.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using correct verb tenses and adding linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide more specific reasons to enrich your response.

Example: I want to sing for my mum because she has taught me so much and always supports me. Singing for her would be a way to show my appreciation.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and plural nouns, and connect your ideas with linking words for coherence.

Example: I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I sing, those around me feel joyful, and I feel happy as well.

× I like singing because singing is make me happy and make me fun with my family or my friend.

✓ I like singing because singing makes me happy and is fun with my family or my friends.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'make me fun' is incorrect; it should be 'is fun'. Additionally, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context of multiple people.

× I have already learned how to sing as a class.

✓ I have already learned how to sing in class.

The phrase 'as a class' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate the location or context where the learning happened.

× I learn how to sing good and bad.

✓ I learn how to sing well and badly.

The words 'good' and 'bad' are adjectives, but here adverbs 'well' and 'badly' should be used to modify the verb 'sing'.

× Sing will you time and thing is good.

✓ Singing will help you spend your time well and is good for you.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly, using proper subject-verb-object order and appropriate expressions.

× I want to sing for my mom because my mom teach me everything and my mom live with me.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because my mom teaches me everything and lives with me.

The verbs 'teach' and 'live' need to be in the third person singular form 'teaches' and 'lives' to agree with the singular subject 'my mom'.

× I think sing can bring happiness to people because when I sing, every people near me is happy and I happy too.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I sing, everyone near me is happy and I am happy too.

The verb 'sing' should be in the gerund form 'singing' to act as the subject. 'Every people' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone' as 'people' is plural. Also, 'I happy too' lacks the verb 'am' and should be 'I am happy too'.