Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answers clearer and more natural by using complete sentences and avoiding repetition. For example, explain your feelings more specifically and use correct grammar.

Example: Yes, I really like singing now. Although I didn't enjoy it before, I have discovered that singing at home with my sister is very relaxing and makes me feel happy.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer with a clear structure and avoid filler words like 'like' and repeated phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing. At first, I didn't know how, but my sister taught me and explained different techniques, so now I can sing better.

Suggestion: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid repeating words and be more specific. Also, organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your thoughts.

Example: I want to sing for my future boyfriend. Although I am single now, I hope to write and sing a sweet song for him about our future together.

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Example: I think singing can bring happiness to people. If they listen to a happy song, it can make them feel joyful, but a sad song might make them feel sad. It depends on their mood and situation.

× Singing make me feel.

✓ Singing makes me feel.

The subject 'Singing' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'makes' instead of 'make'. In English, singular subjects require verbs ending with 's' in the present tense.

× It's like singing is really relaxing and make me happy.

✓ It's like singing is really relaxing and makes me happy.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. In English, third person singular subjects require verbs with an 's' ending in the present tense.

× my sister teach like taught me how to sing

✓ my sister taught me how to sing

The correct past tense of 'teach' is 'taught'. Using the correct past tense verb form is important to indicate completed actions in the past.

× I have learned a lot how to sing.

✓ I have learned a lot about how to sing.

The phrase 'learned a lot how to sing' is missing the preposition 'about' to connect 'learned a lot' with 'how to sing'. Prepositions are necessary to show relationships between words.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I want to sing a very very sweet song for him and our future everything.

✓ I want to sing a very, very sweet song for him and our future together.

The phrase 'our future everything' is unclear and incorrect. Replacing 'everything' with 'together' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× I think it sometime, so if they listen to a sadness song they will be sad but if they listen to a happiness song they will be happiness.

✓ I think sometimes, so if they listen to a sad song they will be sad, but if they listen to a happy song they will be happy.

'adverbs' like 'sometimes' should be used instead of 'sometime' here. Also, 'sadness song' and 'happiness song' are incorrect; adjectives 'sad' and 'happy' should be used to describe 'song'. Finally, 'will be happiness' should be 'will be happy' to use the adjective form.

× It depend on and it also depend on their situation, on their feelings.

✓ It depends on, and it also depends on their situation and their feelings.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the preposition 'on' should be used correctly without repetition and with proper conjunctions.