Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, hãy chú ý đến thì động từ và cách dùng từ để diễn đạt cảm xúc một cách chính xác hơn.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions. For instance, when I feel scared, singing my favorite song instantly lifts my mood. Moreover, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

Suggestion: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Tránh dùng từ không phù hợp hoặc sai chính tả. Hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing. After I left school, I joined a choir where a music teacher taught basic singing techniques. This experience helped me improve my vocal control and gain confidence in performing.

Suggestion: Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các ý. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive and create an encouraging atmosphere. For example, singing together during family gatherings often brings us closer.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, dùng từ đúng nghĩa và tránh lỗi phát âm. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và có ví dụ cụ thể.

Example: Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing aloud helps individuals express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs.

× Just I really enjoy singing because it helps me realize and express my emotion.

✓ I really enjoy singing because it helps me realize and express my emotions.

The original sentence has incorrect word order with 'Just I' at the beginning; it should be 'I just' or simply 'I'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to feelings in general.

× For example, when I feeling scared, singing my favorite song instantly live out my mood.

✓ For example, when I feel scared, singing my favorite song instantly lifts my mood.

The verb 'feeling' should be in present tense 'feel' to match the time frame. 'Live out my mood' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lifts my mood' meaning improves or changes mood.

× Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gathering.

✓ Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

The noun 'gathering' should be plural 'gatherings' to indicate general events. Also, 'during social gathering' needs the plural form to be grammatically correct.

× Thus, I have learned how to think.

✓ Thus, I have learned how to sing.

The sentence likely contains a typo: 'think' should be 'sing' to answer the question about learning to sing.

× When I quit in school, I took part in a Troy where a music teacher talks a basic singing technical.

✓ When I quit school, I took part in a troupe where a music teacher taught basic singing techniques.

'Quit in school' should be 'quit school' without 'in'. 'Troy' is likely a typo for 'troupe' (a group of performers). 'Talks a basic singing technical' is incorrect; it should be 'taught basic singing techniques'.

× It helped me improve my vocal control and confidence in performing.

✓ It helped me improve my vocal control and confidence in performing.

This sentence is correct in past tense as it refers to a past event; no correction needed.

× I would like to sing for my family and cool friends singing for special because they are supportive and creates A1 encouraging atmosphere.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are supportive and create an A1 encouraging atmosphere.

'Cool friends singing for special' is incorrect; it should be 'close friends'. 'Creates' should be 'create' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'A1' is informal but acceptable here; 'an' is needed before 'A1' because it starts with a vowel sound.

× For example, during family gathering, singing together often brings us closer.

✓ For example, during family gatherings, singing together often brings us closer.

'Family gathering' should be plural 'family gatherings' to indicate general events.

× Just a police singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Just singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

'Just a police singing' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'Just singing'. The word 'police' is misplaced and unnecessary here.

× Singing aloud individual chill experts their emotion and can be a great way to really stress for example more people.

✓ Singing aloud allows individuals to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress, for example, for many people.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'individual chill experts their emotion' is incorrect; it should be 'allows individuals to express their emotions'. 'Really stress' should be 'relieve stress'. The phrase 'for example more people' is unclear and corrected to 'for example, for many people'.

× Many people feel awfully and joyful when they sing their favorition.

✓ Many people feel awful and joyful when they sing their favorite songs.

'Awfully' is an adverb but should be the adjective 'awful' to describe feelings. 'Favorition' is a misspelling of 'favorite'. Also, 'songs' is added to complete the phrase 'favorite songs'.