Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答很直接，但可以更自然且豐富一點。建議你在回答時加入更多細節，例如為什麼覺得自己唱得不好，或是你對唱歌的感受，這樣能讓回答更生動且有說服力。

Example: I don't really enjoy singing because I feel that my voice isn't very pleasant. Whenever I try, I get nervous and can't sing well, so I usually avoid it.

Suggestion: 你的回答內容完整，但語句連接可以更流暢。建議使用連接詞來使句子更自然，例如使用"although"或"but"來連接句子，並且可以稍微簡化語言，使表達更口語化。

Example: No, I haven't learned singing properly. Although I've watched some online tutorials, I found them hard to understand. I think singing is definitely a skill that requires proper teaching.

Suggestion: 你的回答有點重複且不夠清楚。建議你直接回答問題，並且提供具體的例子或情境，這樣能讓回答更有說服力且自然。

Example: I'm not confident in my singing, so I probably wouldn't sing for many people. Maybe just close friends or family who wouldn't mind my poor singing.

Suggestion: 你的回答有點不完整，最後一句話沒有結束。建議你完整表達想法，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢，這樣能讓回答更自然且有邏輯。

Example: I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When someone sings well, it can be very uplifting. However, listening to someone who sings poorly might not be as enjoyable.

× I don't like singing because I think I'm not really good at it.

✓ I don't like singing because I don't think I'm really good at it.

The original sentence uses 'I think I'm not really good at it,' which is less natural in English. The correct form is 'I don't think I'm really good at it' to express a negative opinion. This is a present tense issue because the verb 'think' is used in the present tense and needs to be negated properly.

× No, I've never learned that properly before.

✓ No, I've never learnt that properly before.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are past participles of 'learn.' However, 'learnt' is more commonly used in British English, which fits the context better. This is a past tense issue related to verb form preference.

× I have watched some singing instructions on the Internet but I cannot understand what they're talking about.

✓ I have watched some singing instruction videos on the Internet but I cannot understand what they're talking about.

The phrase 'singing instructions' is awkward; 'singing instruction videos' is more natural. Also, 'on the Internet' is correct. This is an issue of word choice and preposition usage.

× I think if I'm gonna sing to anyone then they might be someone who is not good.

✓ I think if I'm going to sing to anyone, then it might be someone who is not good.

The pronoun 'they' is used incorrectly to refer to 'anyone' in this context. 'It' is more appropriate when referring to an unspecified person in this sentence. Also, 'gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred. This is an incorrect use of pronouns issue.

× For those who really good at singing, listening to them can be a cheerful thing.

✓ For those who are really good at singing, listening to them can be a cheerful thing.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'who.' This is a sentence structure error because the relative clause is incomplete without the verb.

× However, listening to someone who is not good at singing.

✓ However, listening to someone who is not good at singing is not enjoyable.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and predicate. To correct it, a main clause should be added to complete the sentence. This is a sentence structure error.