Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。例如“when I have seen in front of other people”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

Example: No, I don't really enjoy singing because I'm not very good at it. Also, I feel nervous and uncomfortable when I sing in front of others, so I usually avoid it.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“I'm not joining singing”。建议使用更准确的表达，并且句子结构更清晰。

Example: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I have many tasks and no time. But in the future, if I have time, I would like to try to improve my singing skills.

Suggestion: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，如“for the close relationship, include”。建议简化句子，明确表达想法，并注意语法正确。

Example: Since I'm not good at singing, I would like to sing only for my close family members and friends because I feel more comfortable with them.

Suggestion: 回答内容混乱，表达不清晰，存在大量语法和词汇错误。建议先理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Example: I think singing can bring happiness to some people because it helps them relax and enjoy themselves. However, others may prefer listening to music instead of singing.

× I feel quite nervous and feel uncomfortable when I have seen in front of other people, so I usually avoid it.

✓ I feel quite nervous and feel uncomfortable when I am seen in front of other people, so I usually avoid it.

这里的时态错误，'have seen' 是现在完成时，表示动作已经完成，但句意是描述当别人看到自己时的状态，应该用被动语态的现在时 'am seen'。

× No, because I'm not joining singing and I have a lot of tasks to do so I didn't have enough time to learn about it.

✓ No, because I'm not joining singing classes and I have a lot of tasks to do, so I didn't have enough time to learn it.

'joining singing' 缺少具体的名词，应该是 'joining singing classes'。另外，'learn about it' 中 'about' 不必要，直接用 'learn it' 更合适。

× You know I'm not good at singing so I want to sing for the close relationship, include my family members and a close friend to make sure I feel comfortable.

✓ You know I'm not good at singing, so I want to sing for close relatives, including my family members and close friends, to make sure I feel comfortable.

'the close relationship' 用词不当，应该用复数名词 'close relatives'，并且 'include' 应改为 'including' 以引出例子。

× Some people think a thing can bring happiness to them because they like seeing and see one thing and seeing can be relaxed for them.

✓ Some people think something can bring happiness to them because they like seeing things, and seeing can help them relax.

'a thing' 应改为更自然的 'something'，'see one thing' 语法不通顺，应改为 'seeing things'，'seeing can be relaxed' 语法错误，应改为 'seeing can help them relax'。

× But other people don't like things so they may be thinking is not good.

✓ But other people don't like those things, so they may think it is not good.

'may be thinking is not good' 结构错误，应改为 'may think it is not good'，并且 'things' 前加指示代词 'those' 更明确。