Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ lặp lại như 'like' quá nhiều và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn, tránh dài dòng. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I enjoy music, but I'm not confident singing in front of others. However, when I'm alone, like in my room or shower, I sing to relieve stress.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ 'like' nhiều lần và câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về việc học nhạc cụ.

Example: No, I haven't learned to sing because I'm afraid to show my voice. Instead, I have tried learning instruments such as piano, guitar, and ukulele, but I lose interest quickly and haven't mastered any.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách tránh dùng từ 'like' quá nhiều và câu nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Although I'm nervous about my voice, I would like to sing for my family because they support me and won't judge me if I make mistakes.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt với nội dung phong phú và từ vựng phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ 'because' nhiều lần.

Example: Of course, singing brings happiness as it allows people to express emotions and relieve stress. Moreover, singing together fosters a sense of community and belonging.

× Well I like music but singing is not really my thing because I'm not confident to like sing in front of others but whenever I'm alone in my room or in the shower I would sing my heart out because like it's helped me to relieve my stress.

✓ Well I like music but singing is not really my thing because I'm not confident to sing in front of others but whenever I'm alone in my room or in the shower I would sing my heart out because it has helped me to relieve my stress.

The phrase 'I'm not confident to like sing' is incorrect because 'confident' is usually followed by 'to' plus the base form of the verb without 'like'. Also, 'like' is used unnecessarily here. Additionally, 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity and correctness. Remove 'like' before 'sing' and use 'to sing' instead. This improves the modal verb usage and verb form.

× Well sadly not because I'm really scared to like show people my singing ability, but I focus on like learning instruments like piano, guitar or ukulele.

✓ Well sadly not because I'm really scared to show people my singing ability, but I focus on learning instruments like piano, guitar or ukulele.

The use of 'to like show' and 'focus on like learning' is incorrect. 'Like' is used as a filler word here and should be removed to maintain proper modal verb and verb usage. The correct form is 'scared to show' and 'focus on learning'.

× Well, even though I'm scared about my voice, but I would like to sing for my family because they are my biggest supporters and I feel comfortable around them and like they will not judge me even if I strike the wrong notes.

✓ Well, even though I'm scared about my voice, I would like to sing for my family because they are my biggest supporters and I feel comfortable around them and they will not judge me even if I strike the wrong notes.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'even though' and 'but' together, which is redundant and incorrect conjunction usage. Removing 'but' corrects the sentence structure and modal verb usage. Also, 'like' before 'they will not judge me' is unnecessary and should be removed.