Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语句不够连贯，有重复词汇，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing, but mostly when I'm alone because I feel shy singing in front of others. However, I sometimes sing when I'm bored or cooking dinner, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，句子较长且不够连贯。建议使用简洁句子，注意时态和语法，合理使用连接词。

Example: Yes, I learned singing a few years ago when I was involved in musical theater. I took many lessons with my favorite teacher, but later I had less time because of my studies.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够明确，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子表达自己的想法，并适当使用连接词。

Example: I don't sing much now, but in the past, I wanted to perform in big musicals like Hamilton and play major roles.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁。建议用更准确的词汇，避免重复，逻辑更清晰。

Example: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness. Many people earn a living from it, and it allows them to express their feelings and relax.

× I think singing something I enjoy only on my own 'cause I'm really afraid to sing in front of other other people, except for like people that I really know.

✓ I think singing is something I enjoy only on my own 'cause I'm really afraid to sing in front of other people, except for people that I really know.

句子中缺少系动词“is”，导致主语和表语之间缺少连接，属于单复数问题。应加上“is”使句子完整。

× except for like people that I really know. Like a long time relate that I have a long time relationship and maybe when I'm bored or when I'm preparing for dinner, I sing to like.

✓ except for people that I really know, like a long-time relation. I have a long-time relationship and maybe when I'm bored or when I'm preparing for dinner, I sing.

“relate”应为“relation”表示“关系”，且“long time”应连写为“long-time”作形容词使用。句子结构不完整，需拆分为两句。

× I did actually, but it's like a few years ago I had like tests on singing and cause I used, I used to do musical theater and I'm really good at singing.

✓ I did actually, but it was like a few years ago. I had tests on singing because I used to do musical theater and I was really good at singing.

“it's like a few years ago”时态错误，应使用过去时“it was”。“cause”应为“because”。“I'm really good”应改为过去时“I was really good”。

× So I took a lot of singing lessons with, with one of my favorite singing teacher. And but then after that I had a lot of study coming over and I just didn't have a lot of time for singing.

✓ So I took a lot of singing lessons with one of my favorite singing teachers. But after that, I had a lot of studies coming up and I just didn't have a lot of time for singing.

“And but then”重复使用连接词，应选择其中一个。“teacher”应为复数“teachers”。“study coming over”表达不当，应为“studies coming up”。

× Well, nowadays I don't have a very big passion about singing anymore, but if it's before, I would definitely enjoy singing in a big musical theater like Hamilton and like a big part.

✓ Well, nowadays I don't have a very big passion for singing anymore, but before, I would definitely enjoy singing in a big musical theater like Hamilton and playing a big part.

“passion about”应为“passion for”。“if it's before”表达不自然，应改为“before”。“like a big part”应改为“playing a big part”。

× Oh yes, definitely a thing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Oh yes, definitely a thing can bring happiness to people.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× As we all know, it's a job for a lot of people and obviously jobs bring you money and it's something that will keep you going with the thing you like.

✓ As we all know, it's a job for a lot of people and obviously jobs bring you money, and it's something that will keep you going with the things you like.

“thing you like”应为复数“things you like”，因为前文提到多种事物。

× And there's just so many options for people who do singing and and sometimes they express their feelings to make them relax.

✓ And there are just so many options for people who sing, and sometimes they express their feelings to help them relax.

“do singing”表达不自然，应改为“sing”。“and and”重复，应去掉一个。最后“make them relax”应改为“help them relax”更合适。