Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は自然で直接的ですが、同じ表現の繰り返し（"when others when others"）があり、冗長に感じられます。また、理由の説明がやや単純なので、より具体的な詳細を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、どのような場面で恥ずかしいと感じるのか、または歌うことが好きではない理由を詳しく述べることが効果的です。

Example: I don't like singing, especially in front of people, because I often feel nervous and worry about making mistakes. For this reason, I prefer to sing only when I am alone, where I can enjoy it without feeling self-conscious.

× I don't like singing, especially in front of people. I'm not good at singing and I feel embarrassed when others when others hear me.

✓ I don't like singing, especially in front of people. I'm not good at singing and I feel embarrassed when others hear me.

The phrase 'when others when others hear me' contains a repeated segment 'when others'. This is a redundancy error and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing the repeated phrase corrects the sentence. To improve, carefully proofread to avoid repeating words or phrases unnecessarily.