Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'stress is soft'는 부적절한 표현이며, 더 명확하고 자연스러운 이유를 제시해야 합니다. 또한, 문장이 다소 어색하고 간결하지 않아 효과적인 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하게 유지하면서 명확한 이유와 감정을 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mind after a long day.

Suggestion: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 완성되지 않아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 'hadn't a chance running about sing a song singing song' 부분은 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 경험을 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally because my major is different, but I enjoy singing at karaoke with my friends.

Suggestion: 'my thing is not good'라는 표현이 모호하고 부자연스럽습니다. 자신의 노래 실력이 좋지 않다는 점을 명확하게 표현하고, 이유를 덧붙이면 더 자연스러운 답변이 됩니다.

Example: Actually, I don't like singing in front of others because I think my singing skills are not very good.

Suggestion: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 'give other people less trust'는 적절하지 않은 표현입니다. 노래가 사람들에게 행복을 줄 수 있다는 이유를 명확하고 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel joyful.

× I like singing because when I sing a song my stress is soft so I can feel fresh.

✓ I like singing because when I sing a song, my stress is reduced so I can feel fresh.

The phrase 'my stress is soft' is incorrect; 'soft' is an adjective that does not describe 'stress' properly. The correct expression is 'my stress is reduced' or 'my stress lessens' to convey the intended meaning. Also, a comma is needed after 'song' for clarity.

× No I haven't because my major is not singing so I hadn't a chance running about sing a song singing song.

✓ No, I haven't because my major is not singing, so I haven't had a chance to sing songs. But I go to karaoke.

The sentence contains multiple tense errors and awkward phrasing. 'I hadn't a chance' should be 'I haven't had a chance' to match the present perfect tense. 'Running about sing a song singing song' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'to sing songs.' Also, punctuation and sentence structure need correction for clarity.

× Actually, I don't want to sing in front of other people because my thing is not good.

✓ Actually, I don't want to sing in front of other people because my voice is not good.

The word 'thing' is vague and incorrect here. The correct pronoun is 'voice' to refer to the ability to sing. This clarifies the meaning.

× Yes I do, because singing can give other people less trust and.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing can give other people more confidence.

The phrase 'less trust' is incorrect in this context; 'more confidence' is the appropriate quantifier to express the positive effect of singing. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.