Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I don't have a professional singing voice, but I enjoy singing in the bathroom because it helps me relax after a long day at work.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi như 'I'm not intend'. Hãy dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích thêm một chút để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

Example: Yes, I have taken some singing lessons, but only for fun because I don't plan to become a professional singer.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời dùng câu rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I want to sing for my baby, who is two years old and really enjoys music. I plan to learn some lullabies to sing to her before bedtime.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, singing lullabies to my baby helps us bond and creates wonderful memories for both of us.

× Actually I don't have a Woodstock voice but I usually sing when I was when I am in the bathroom.

✓ Actually I don't have a Woodstock voice but I usually sing when I am in the bathroom.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'am'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'am' should be used consistently.

× It made me feel less trapped, like let my hair down or long working day.

✓ It makes me feel less trapped, like letting my hair down after a long working day.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and structure. 'Made' should be 'makes' to match habitual action, and 'let my hair down' should be in gerund form 'letting my hair down' to function as a noun phrase. Also, 'long working day' needs a preposition 'after' to clarify meaning.

× Yeah, because I I'm not intend to follow the professional singing career just for fun.

✓ Yeah, because I don't intend to follow a professional singing career; it's just for fun.

The modal verb 'do' is missing before 'intend' to form the negative present tense. Also, 'a' is needed before 'professional singing career' as it is a singular countable noun.

× Maybe my baby, uh, my baby World is 2 years old and she seems to very like music.

✓ Maybe my baby, uh, my baby World is 2 years old and she seems to like music very much.

The phrase 'seems to very like' is incorrect. 'Like' is a verb and should not be modified by 'very' directly. Instead, 'very much' should be used after the verb to express intensity.

× I want to learn some signature music to her before we go to sleep.

✓ I want to learn some signature music for her before we go to sleep.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate the beneficiary of the action.

× At animals should be poor singing lullabies to my my girl baby.

✓ Actually, I should be singing lullabies to my baby girl.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'At animals should be poor' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper structure.

× It's great way for it to create memory memories together and I think that can help one the daughter and the mother as well.

✓ It's a great way to create memories together, and I think that can help both the daughter and the mother as well.

The phrase 'great way' needs the article 'a'. 'Memory memories' is redundant; 'memories' alone is correct. 'One the daughter and the mother' is incorrect; 'both the daughter and the mother' is appropriate.