Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在一些语法错误和用词不当，如“saying”应为“singing”，“give me a good emotion”表达不自然。建议注意动词形式和搭配，使用更地道的表达。

Example: I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, singing my favorite songs always lifts my mood and makes me feel happy.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如“haven't learn”应为“haven't learned”，“had something lessons”表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和更准确的词汇表达。

Example: To be honest, I haven't learned to sing professionally, but I took some lessons when I was in primary school. Besides that, I often watch online videos to improve my singing skills and learn new techniques.

Suggestion: 回答中多处语法错误和表达不清，如“say for”应为“sing for”，“I had have”不正确，最后一句“Moreover, shame.”无意义。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免无关词汇。

Example: I definitely want to sing for my friends because they are the best audience. Their encouragement boosts my confidence and helps me feel relaxed.

Suggestion: 回答中有拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，表达不够自然。建议注意拼写和用词准确，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Example: Absolutely yes. I believe singing can not only bring happiness to people but also help them escape from the busy life. For example, whenever I sing my favorite songs, I feel relaxed and comfortable.

× I really enjoy singing because it allows me to unwind from hustle and bustle.

✓ I really enjoy singing because it allows me to unwind from the hustle and bustle.

短语中缺少定冠词“the”，应为“the hustle and bustle”，表示特定的喧嚣和忙碌。

× For instance, after a stressful day, saying my favorite song helps boost my mood and give me a good emotion.

✓ For instance, after a stressful day, singing my favorite song helps boost my mood and gives me good feelings.

动词“singing”应替代“saying”，因为这里指的是唱歌而非说话；动词“give”应与主语“singing my favorite song”保持一致，改为“gives”；“a good emotion”表达不自然，改为“good feelings”更合适。

× To be honest, I haven't learn how to sing professionally, but I had something lessons when I was in primary school.

✓ To be honest, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I had some lessons when I was in primary school.

“haven't learn”应为现在完成时，动词应为过去分词“learned”；“something lessons”搭配错误，应为“some lessons”。

× Besides that, I usually watch some videos on the Internet to improve my singing skills and learn new techniques.

✓ Besides that, I usually watch some videos on the Internet to improve my singing skills and learn new techniques.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I definitely want to say for my friends because they are always the best audience that I had have.

✓ I definitely want to sing for my friends because they are always the best audience that I have had.

“want to say”应为“want to sing”，因为题目是关于唱歌；“I had have”时态错误，应为现在完成时“have had”。

× Their encouragement not only boosts my confidence but also helps me feel more relaxed. Moreover, shame.

✓ Their encouragement not only boosts my confidence but also helps me feel more relaxed. Moreover, it relieves my shame.

“Moreover, shame.”句子结构不完整，缺少谓语，应补充完整表达。

× Absolutely yes. I believe seeing can not only bring happiness to people but also help people escape from hustle and bustle.

✓ Absolutely yes. I believe singing can not only bring happiness to people but also help people escape from the hustle and bustle.

“seeing”应为“singing”，符合上下文；“hustle and bustle”前应加定冠词“the”。

× For instance, whenever I sing my favorite songs, I feel more relaxed and cozy.

✓ For instance, whenever I sing my favorite songs, I feel more relaxed and cozy.

该句语法正确，无需修改。