Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現を避けるために、より簡潔で正確な文を心がけましょう。例えば、"musical movies and musical"は重複しているので、"musicals"にまとめると良いです。また、"those amazing song which give me power"は文法的に誤りがあるため、"those amazing songs that give me energy"のように修正しましょう。

Example: Yes, I like singing and often enjoy going to karaoke alone. My hobby is watching musicals, and I really love those amazing songs that give me energy.

Suggestion: 回答は内容が明確ですが、文法の改善が必要です。例えば、"learned basic singing skill"は単数形ではなく複数形の"skills"が適切です。また、"offered me a basic music knowledge and skills"は不自然なので、"taught me basic music knowledge and skills"にすると良いでしょう。

Example: I only learned basic singing skills when I was in elementary school, but since then I haven't received professional training. However, my mom, who used to be a piano teacher, taught me basic music knowledge and skills.

Suggestion: 回答は具体的で良いですが、細かい文法の修正が必要です。例えば、"sing it to her"は複数の歌を指しているので、"sing them to her"が適切です。また、"traditional and old Japanese songs"は"traditional Japanese songs"で十分です。

Example: I'd like to sing for my grandmother. She really loves singing while doing housework, such as cleaning her room or washing dishes. She taught me some traditional Japanese songs, so I'd like to sing them to her in the near future.

Suggestion: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法と表現の改善が必要です。例えば、"when we experience COVID-19 pandemic in 2020"は過去の出来事なので、"during the COVID-19 pandemic in 2020"が適切です。また、"videos which was provided"は"videos which were provided"に修正しましょう。さらに、"they sang a song such as Les Miserables"は不自然なので、"they performed songs from musicals like Les Miserables"にすると良いです。

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, especially during the COVID-19 pandemic in 2020. I used to watch YouTube videos provided by stage musical companies, where they performed songs from musicals like Les Miserables.

× I really love those amazing song which give me power.

✓ I really love those amazing songs which give me power.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' to agree with the plural demonstrative 'those' and the plural verb 'give'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I only learned basic singing skill when I was elementary school, but since then I haven't learned in a professional way.

✓ I only learned basic singing skills when I was in elementary school, but since then I haven't learned in a professional way.

The phrase 'basic singing skill' should be plural 'basic singing skills' because it refers to multiple abilities. Also, 'when I was elementary school' is missing the preposition 'in' before 'elementary school'.

× I only learned basic singing skill when I was elementary school, but since then I haven't learned in a professional way.

✓ I only learned basic singing skills when I was in elementary school, but since then I haven't learned in a professional way.

The preposition 'in' is required before 'elementary school' to indicate the time or place where the learning occurred.

× She really loves singing during her housework, for example cleaning up her room or washing dishes.

✓ She really loves singing during her housework, for example, cleaning up her room or washing the dishes.

Adding a comma after 'for example' improves clarity. Also, 'washing dishes' is better expressed as 'washing the dishes' to specify the dishes being washed.

× She taught me some traditional and old Japanese songs, so I'd like to sing it to her in the near future.

✓ She taught me some traditional and old Japanese songs, so I'd like to sing them to her in the near future.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'songs' which is plural, so it should be 'them' to agree in number.

× I used to watch YouTube videos which was provided from stage musical companies and they sang a song such as Les Miserables.

✓ I used to watch YouTube videos which were provided by stage musical companies and they sang songs such as Les Miserables.

The verb 'was' should be plural 'were' to agree with the plural noun 'videos'. The preposition 'from' should be 'by' to indicate the provider. Also, 'a song such as Les Miserables' should be 'songs such as Les Miserables' because Les Miserables is a musical with multiple songs.