Singing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidate
Personally, I love to sing, it just refreshes my mind and it brings a sense of happiness. I try to sing as much as possible but due to my hectic schedule, I'm not able to do so.
Examiner
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidate
When I was 8 years old, my mother enrolled me in a music class where I trained for two years. Although I enjoyed my time there, I couldn't complete my lessons because at that time I had to balance both my badminton career and studies. So.
Examiner
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidate
To be honest, I really am an introverted person so I think singing personally is something which I do for myself and I don't think I would be comfortable singing in front of others, but if I do get an opportunity I would.
Examiner
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidate
I believe it totally depends on the person. While some people do find happiness in singing as it relieves the stress, others cope with their tension in other ways such as doing exercise or meditation.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: Your answer is natural and clear, but try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for better effectiveness.
Example: Yes, I love singing because it refreshes my mind and brings me happiness. However, due to my hectic schedule, I don't get to sing as often as I'd like.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid short or incomplete sentences.
Example: Yes, I started learning to sing when I was 8 years old, as my mother enrolled me in a music class. I trained there for two years, but I couldn't complete the lessons because I had to balance my badminton career and studies at that time.
Who do you want to sing for?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Your answer is honest but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your point clearly with fewer words and use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Example: I am quite introverted, so I usually sing for myself. However, if I get an opportunity, I would be willing to sing in front of others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Score: 90.0Suggestion: Good answer with clear opinion and supporting details. To improve, you can add linking words to enhance coherence and use more specific examples.
Example: I believe it depends on the person; while some find happiness in singing because it relieves stress, others prefer coping methods like exercise or meditation.
Grammar
× Personally, I love to sing, it just refreshes my mind and it brings a sense of happiness.
✓ Personally, I love to sing because it just refreshes my mind and brings a sense of happiness.
The original sentence is a comma splice, joining two independent clauses with only a comma. This is incorrect sentence structure. Using 'because' properly connects the clauses, making the sentence grammatically correct.
× So.
The word 'So.' is a sentence fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be removed or completed to avoid sentence structure errors.
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