Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "singing is one of my favorite hobbies" and avoid repeating "singing" too many times. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind after a stressful day at work. I usually sing every day, which makes me feel calm and happy.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like "hire AT shirt to teach me what about." Use linking words to explain your experience logically.

Example: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I have always practiced by myself since I was a child, singing songs from animations, and gradually improved over time.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and word choice are important. For example, "if I have tissues" should be "if I have a choice." Also, use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Example: Honestly, I can sing for anyone, but if I have a choice, I prefer to sing for my close friends and family because I feel more relaxed and confident with them.

Suggestion: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms, such as "helps" and "makes." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and add specific reasons.

Example: Yes, definitely. Singing helps me relieve stress and makes me feel happy because I can express the emotions in the song. I believe it can bring happiness to others as well.

× Of course, singing is one of my favorites hobby.

✓ Of course, singing is one of my favorite hobbies.

The word 'favorites' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; the correct adjective is 'favorite'. Also, 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it refers to one among multiple hobbies.

× I always sing, I would say it every day and singing helped me feel relaxed and calm and also help me unwind from the stress from work.

✓ I always sing, I would say it every day, and singing helps me feel relaxed and calm and also helps me unwind from the stress from work.

The verbs 'helped' and 'help' should be in present tense 'helps' to agree with the present habitual action. Also, 'singing' as a subject requires singular verb 'helps'.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense form; 'learned' is more common in American English. Both are acceptable, but consistency is important. Here, 'learned' is preferred for clarity.

× I would say no, I always practice by myself singing to the opening song of the animation since my childhood and I just like it so I improve day by day without having to hire AT shirt to teach me what about.

✓ I would say no. I have always practiced singing by myself to the opening song of the animation since my childhood because I like it, so I improve day by day without having to hire a teacher to teach me.

The original sentence is run-on and unclear. It needs to be split and restructured for clarity. 'Practice by myself singing to' is awkward; 'practiced singing by myself to' is better. 'Hire AT shirt' is a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'hire a teacher'. 'What about' is unclear and removed.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× To be honest, I can sing for anyone but if I have tissues I would choose my close friends and my families because being with them make me show my potential more because I'm relaxed with them without being nervous.

✓ To be honest, I can sing for anyone, but if I have a choice, I would choose my close friends and my family because being with them makes me show my potential more since I'm relaxed with them and not nervous.

'Tissues' is incorrect; the intended word is 'choices'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'being with them'. The sentence is also improved for clarity and flow.

× being with them make me show my potential more because I'm relaxed with them without being nervous.

✓ Being with them makes me show my potential more because I'm relaxed with them without being nervous.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'being with them'.

× Yes definitely. I really like singing because it helps me unwind the stress and also make me feel happy because I can feel the emotion within the song while singing along.

✓ Yes, definitely. I really like singing because it helps me unwind the stress and also makes me feel happy because I can feel the emotion within the song while singing along.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it' referring to singing.

× I think it's definitely help other people too.

✓ I think it definitely helps other people too.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'.