Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words and repetition to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and keep your sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it acts as a stressbuster for me. Moreover, singing helps me refresh my mind and feel more relaxed.

Suggestion: Focus on using correct grammar and avoid unnecessary pauses or filler words. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details, and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in the 5th grade during a singing class. After that, I participated in several school singing competitions to improve my skills.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating ideas and filler words. Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or feelings using linking words to make your response more coherent and natural.

Example: I want to sing for my husband because I love him very much. Also, singing for him helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Suggestion: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples or reasons to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it refreshes the mind. Additionally, some songs help reduce stress and make people feel more peaceful and joyful.

× Definitely, I adored the singing as it act as a stressbuster activity for me because it helps to relieve my risk uh, relieve my stress.

✓ Definitely, I adore singing as it acts as a stressbuster activity for me because it helps to relieve my stress.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'adored' (past tense) instead of 'adore' (present tense) to express a current preference, and 'act' should be 'acts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'my risk' is incorrect and should be removed to clarify the meaning.

× To be honest, I only remember that when I was studying in the 5th standard, then at that time there was a singing class.

✓ To be honest, I only remember that when I was studying in the 5th standard, there was a singing class at that time.

The phrase 'then at that time' is redundant; 'there was' correctly uses past tense to describe a past event. The sentence is corrected for clarity and conciseness.

× So, so uh, this is a time when I, uh, when I was learnt, uh, when I was learnt how to uh, sing us sing in a proper way.

✓ So, this was the time when I learned how to sing properly.

The phrase 'was learnt' is incorrect; 'learned' is the correct past tense form. Also, 'sing us sing' is incorrect and should be 'sing properly' for clarity and correctness.

× After that, I started to take a participate in a singing competition at the school.

✓ After that, I started to participate in a singing competition at school.

The phrase 'take a participate' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'participate in'. Also, 'at the school' is better as 'at school' in this context.

× Well, I want to sing uh, for my husband Well, I, I love him very much apart from this.

✓ Well, I want to sing for my husband. Well, I love him very much apart from this.

The sentence is corrected for punctuation and clarity; no third person singular verb error here, but the original sentence was fragmented and needed proper punctuation.

× I told you that it act as a stressbuster activity for me, so it helps to relax my mind and I feel very refreshed.

✓ I told you that it acts as a stressbuster activity for me, so it helps to relax my mind and I feel very refreshed.

The verb 'act' should be 'acts' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in present tense.

× To a large extent, I would say yes, that singing can bring a happiness to the people as, uh, as the individual can refresh their mind.

✓ To a large extent, I would say yes, that singing can bring happiness to people as individuals can refresh their minds.

The article 'a' before 'happiness' is incorrect because 'happiness' is an uncountable noun. Also, 'the people' should be 'people' to generalize, and 'the individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match 'their'.

× Apart from this, there are some uh, songs which, uh, which helps to reduce their stress and which makes their, makes them more peaceful and happier.

✓ Apart from this, there are some songs which help to reduce stress and make people more peaceful and happier.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'songs' (plural), so the verbs should be plural 'help' and 'make'. Also, 'their stress' and 'their' are vague; 'stress' and 'people' are clearer and more general.