Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'washroom singer' and instead use more common expressions.

Example: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relieve stress and keeps me happy and peaceful. For instance, I often sing in private places when I want to relax.

Suggestion: Your answer is direct but contains grammatical errors and lacks supporting details. Try to use correct grammar and add a reason or example to enrich your answer.

Example: No, I have never learned how to sing formally because I have always enjoyed singing naturally since my childhood.

Suggestion: Your answer is good with clear structure and examples. However, the phrase 'because they are sporty' is unclear and irrelevant here. Try to use more precise vocabulary and ensure all details support your main idea.

Example: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it creates a warm and encouraging atmosphere. For example, during family gatherings, singing together helps us bond and makes the moments memorable.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps relieve stress and acts like a form of meditation, which keeps people healthy and happy.

× Yes, I love singing, I actually am a washroom singer as I love to sing songs to relieve my stress and it is very good to stay happy and peaceful.

✓ Yes, I love singing. I actually am a washroom singer as I love to sing songs to relieve my stress, and it is very good to stay happy and peaceful.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. It should be split into two sentences or connected properly with a conjunction and comma to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I never learned how to sing. It is a basic skill comes from my childhood.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing. It is a basic skill that comes from my childhood.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'that' before 'comes'. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'that' correctly links the clause to the noun 'skill'.

× Yes, in my perspective singing can bring happiness to people because singing is that which can relieve the stress from other from the people as it is a good meditation to stay fit and fine and happy.

✓ Yes, from my perspective, singing can bring happiness to people because singing is something that can relieve stress from others, as it is a good meditation to stay fit, fine, and happy.

The phrase 'in my perspective' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from'. Also, 'relieve the stress from other from the people' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'relieve stress from others'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.