Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'um'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, 'The lyrics are very fascinating to me'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions. Moreover, I find the lyrics very fascinating, especially in recent popular songs, which I enjoy singing.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, instead of 'never tried my hands on learning', say 'never tried learning'.

Example: In India, there are many varieties of music, such as classical and international styles. However, I have never tried learning to sing any of these genres.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent by removing filler words and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Example: If given a chance, I would like to sing for my three-year-old toddler because I enjoy sharing songs and lyrics with him.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and use more precise vocabulary. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'lines are written for the music' and 'joyful memories among each other'. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Example: Yes, singing brings happiness because the lyrics are timeless and help create joyful memories that people can share together.

× The lyrics is very fascinating to me

✓ The lyrics are very fascinating to me

The word 'lyrics' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number with the subject.

× songs that are coming out is also much more uh, in hype

✓ songs that are coming out are also much more uh, in hype

The subject 'songs' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× there are a lot of varieties of uh, music, uh, for example, that are classical music

✓ there are a lot of varieties of uh, music, uh, for example, classical music

The phrase 'that are classical music' is redundant and awkward here; removing it clarifies the sentence. Also, 'varieties of music' is plural and correctly used with 'are'.

× There are international music

✓ There is international music

'Music' is an uncountable noun and treated as singular, so 'is' should be used instead of 'are'.

× my toddler who is 3 years old and I like to spend uh, that whole singing and lyrics with him

✓ my toddler who is 3 years old and I like to spend uh, that whole singing and those lyrics with him

'Lyrics' is plural, so it should be preceded by 'those' instead of 'that' to correctly refer to plural noun.

× those lines are written for the music, are very eternal

✓ those lines written for the music are very eternal

The comma after 'music' is unnecessary and breaks the sentence structure; removing it improves clarity.