Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I always seem singing'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me reduce stress after a long day at school. Moreover, I feel happy when I sing, especially with my family and friends.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'become be a singer'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I consider it just a hobby. Besides, I don't plan to become a professional singer in the future.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'reduce chess' thay vì 'reduce stress'. Bạn nên sửa lỗi và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I usually sing for myself because after a tiring day at school, especially when I have math classes, singing my favorite songs helps me reduce stress.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'some people don't have a special skills singing'. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

Example: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the song and the singer's skills. If someone lacks singing skills, the song might not sound good and could spoil the mood.

× I always seem singing is one of my hobbies because I can reduce my stress after a long day at school.

✓ I always seem to enjoy singing as one of my hobbies because I can reduce my stress after a long day at school.

The verb 'seem' should be followed by 'to' plus the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. The correct structure is 'seem to do something'. Here, 'seem singing' is incorrect; it should be 'seem to enjoy singing'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the verb pattern.

× Also I can feel happy when I sing with especially with my family or my friends.

✓ Also, I can feel happy when I sing, especially with my family or my friends.

The phrase 'with especially with' is redundant and incorrect. The preposition 'with' should only appear once before 'especially'. Also, a comma is needed before 'especially' to separate the clauses properly. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing. I just see singing as a hobby so I don't want to learn deeply on it.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing. I just see singing as a hobby, so I don't want to study it deeply.

The phrase 'learn deeply on it' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'learn' is usually followed by an object without a preposition, but 'study' is more appropriate when referring to learning something in depth. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses. This correction improves the sentence's naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× Also I don't have any plan to become be a singer in the future.

✓ Also, I don't have any plans to become a singer in the future.

The phrase 'become be a singer' contains an extra 'be' which is incorrect. The correct verb form is 'become a singer'. Also, 'plan' should be pluralized to 'plans' when used with 'any'. A comma after 'Also' improves readability. This correction fixes verb usage and noun number agreement.

× I always want to sing for myself because after a long day at school I will feel tired and stress, especially in the day with maths, so I really want to sing my favorite song to reduce chess.

✓ I always want to sing for myself because after a long day at school I feel tired and stressed, especially on days with math, so I really want to sing my favorite song to reduce stress.

The phrase 'will feel' is unnecessary here; the present tense 'feel' is more appropriate for habitual actions. 'Stress' should be 'stressed' as an adjective describing the subject. 'In the day with maths' is incorrect; it should be 'on days with math'. 'Chess' is a typo and should be 'stress'. These corrections fix tense, adjective form, preposition use, and word choice.

× I think it depends on what the song it is and who is singing because for some people don't have a special skills singing so this song can be very bad that can make a mess.

✓ I think it depends on what the song is and who is singing because some people don't have special singing skills, so the song can be very bad and make a mess.

The phrase 'what the song it is' is redundant; 'what the song is' is correct. 'For some people don't have' is incorrect; it should be 'some people don't have'. 'A special skills' is incorrect because 'skills' is plural; it should be 'special singing skills'. The sentence is long and run-on; adding commas and conjunctions improves clarity. These corrections address sentence structure, pronoun use, and article usage.