Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I don't like singing because I can't memorize the lyrics and I feel shy singing in front of others, so I prefer listening to music."

Example: I don't like singing because I can't remember the lyrics well, and I feel shy singing in front of people. Therefore, I prefer listening to music instead.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "No, I have never tried to learn singing because since childhood I have preferred listening to music and never thought about learning to sing."

Example: No, I have never tried to learn singing because since I was a child, I have always preferred listening to music and never considered learning to sing.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and use correct grammar. Avoid repetition and improve fluency. For example, "I don't want to sing for anyone because I enjoy listening to music more; it makes me feel comfortable."

Example: I don't want to sing for anyone because I enjoy listening to music more, which makes me feel comfortable.

Suggestion: Complete your answer with clear ideas and use linking words. For example, "Definitely, singing can bring happiness because people enjoy singing alone or with others during their free time."

Example: Definitely, singing can bring happiness because people enjoy singing alone or with friends during their free time.

× No, usually I don't like singing because I could not memorize the lyrics so and another point is I feel very shy to sing a song in front of others so I prefer to listening music instead of singing.

✓ No, usually I don't like singing because I cannot memorize the lyrics, and another point is I feel very shy to sing a song in front of others, so I prefer listening to music instead of singing.

The phrase 'could not memorize' should be 'cannot memorize' to express present inability. Also, 'prefer to listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer listening to music' because 'prefer' is followed by the gerund form with 'to'. Additionally, conjunctions and sentence structure were improved for clarity.

× No, I never try to learn singing.

✓ No, I never tried to learn singing.

The verb 'try' should be in the past tense 'tried' because the sentence refers to a past action that did not happen.

× Actually from the childhood I always prefer to listening music and never I thought to learn singing.

✓ Actually, since childhood, I have always preferred listening to music and never thought about learning singing.

'From the childhood' is incorrect; 'since childhood' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Prefer to listening music' should be 'preferred listening to music' because 'prefer' is followed by gerund with 'to'. Also, 'never I thought to learn singing' is incorrect; it should be 'never thought about learning singing' for proper verb and preposition use.

× No, actually I never want to sing.

✓ No, actually I never want to sing.

Although 'never want to sing' is understandable, it is more natural to say 'I do not want to sing' or 'I have never wanted to sing.' However, since 'never want' is not a modal verb error strictly, no correction is made here as per instructions.

× I I always love to listening music.

✓ I always love listening to music.

'Love to listening music' is incorrect; the verb 'love' is followed by the gerund form 'listening' with the preposition 'to' as in 'listening to music.' Also, the repeated 'I' was removed.

× It's make me comfortable rather than sing by singing by myself.

✓ It makes me more comfortable than singing by myself.

'It's make me comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'It makes me comfortable' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'rather than sing by singing by myself' is awkward; 'more comfortable than singing by myself' is clearer and grammatically correct.