Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is honest and clear, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for naturalness. For example, "I'm not very good at singing and feel embarrassed when I do it, especially in front of others. However, I enjoy listening to music because it motivates me and helps me relax."

Example: I'm not very good at singing and feel embarrassed when I do it, especially in front of others. However, I enjoy listening to music because it motivates me and helps me relax.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words. For example, "I have never had formal singing lessons. In school, music classes focused on instruments rather than singing, so I mostly just imitate singers when I try."

Example: I have never had formal singing lessons. In school, music classes focused on instruments rather than singing, so I mostly just imitate singers when I try.

Suggestion: Your answer is creative and clear, but try to improve fluency and avoid hesitation. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "If I had to sing, I would sing for my cats because they wouldn't judge me. Besides, they might even enjoy my voice. Generally, I try to avoid singing in front of people."

Example: If I had to sing, I would sing for my cats because they wouldn't judge me. Besides, they might even enjoy my voice. Generally, I try to avoid singing in front of people.

Suggestion: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, "Of course, I think singing brings happiness to people. For some, it helps release their inner feelings and reduces stress. For instance, many enjoy going to karaoke to have fun."

Example: Of course, I think singing brings happiness to people. For some, it helps release their inner feelings and reduces stress. For instance, many enjoy going to karaoke to have fun.

× I'm not the most well singsong person, I don't really like singing and I think it's because embarrassment comes first when I sing.

✓ I'm not the most well singsong person, I don't really like singing and I think it's because embarrassment comes first when I sing.

No correction needed for the verb + -ing form in this sentence.

× But I do love listening to music.

✓ But I do love listening to music.

No correction needed for the verb + -ing form in this sentence.

× It gives me motivation to work and relaxes me.

✓ It gives me motivation to work and relaxes me.

No correction needed for the verb + -ing form in this sentence.

× Just not the singing part.

✓ Just not the singing part.

No correction needed for the verb + -ing form in this sentence.

× Especially when there's somebody near me, I'm too shocked.

✓ Especially when there's somebody near me, I'm too shocked.

No correction needed for the verb + -ing form in this sentence.

× I never had a chance to learn how to sing properly.

✓ I have never had a chance to learn how to sing properly.

The present perfect tense 'have never had' is more appropriate here because the action relates to the experience up to now, not a specific past time.

× I think I only listen to people sing and whenever I try to sing, it's just me mimicking those people.

✓ I think I only listen to people sing and whenever I try to sing, it's just me mimicking those people.

No correction needed for present tense usage here.

× It's it's because we didn't really have singing in music class.

✓ It's because we didn't really have singing in music class.

The repetition 'It's it's' is a redundancy and should be corrected to a single 'It's' for proper sentence structure.

× It was always instruments.

✓ It was always instruments.

No correction needed; past tense 'was' is appropriate here.

× I think that's why I know.

✓ I think that's why I know.

No correction needed for present tense usage here.

× If I had to sing, I think I'd sing for my cats.

✓ If I had to sing, I think I'd sing for my cats.

No correction needed; modal verb usage is correct.

× It's because, well, my cats will probably not judge me on my singing and maybe they'd enjoy it because they like my voice.

✓ It's because, well, my cats will probably not judge me for my singing and maybe they'd enjoy it because they like my voice.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'judge me for my singing'.

× I if possible, I try to avoid situations where I have to sing for someone.

✓ If possible, I try to avoid situations where I have to sing for someone.

The phrase 'I if possible' is incorrect; it should be 'If possible' to correctly express the condition.

× Of course, I think singing will gives people happiness.

✓ Of course, I think singing will give people happiness.

After modal verb 'will', the base form of the verb 'give' should be used, not 'gives'.

× It makes for some people singing really releases their inner character.

✓ For some people, singing really releases their inner character.

The original sentence structure is awkward and incorrect; reordering improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It helps them for example reduce stress as well.

✓ It helps them, for example, reduce stress as well.

Commas are needed around 'for example' to correctly set off the phrase; also, 'helps them reduce' is correct without 'for'.

× For some people I know that going to for example karaoke is really good.

✓ For some people I know, going to karaoke, for example, is really good.

The phrase 'going to for example karaoke' is incorrect; proper placement of 'for example' and commas improves sentence structure.