Singing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidate
MMM In my opinion, I don't like singing because I think my accent is so terrible and I feel impressed when I sing in front of an audience.
Examiner
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidate
MMM yeah my friend sent me a lot of tips to sing better and I tried to apply it when in my free time and I it uh, improved me a bit.
Examiner
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidate
Personally, I want to sing with my friends who usually sing better and I feel comfortable when I sing with my friends. For example, I often go to karaoke with my.
Examiner
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidate
Yeah, absolutely. I think singing usually give people PO positive emotion in their life which helps them relax and recharge the energy to start a new days.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng tiếng lắp và từ không cần thiết như "MMM" và "in my opinion" khi câu trả lời đã rõ ràng. Hãy cố gắng nói tự nhiên và trực tiếp hơn, đồng thời giải thích rõ hơn về cảm xúc của bạn khi hát trước đám đông.
Example: I don't like singing because I feel self-conscious about my accent and get nervous when I perform in front of people.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh tiếng lắp như "MMM" và "uh" và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và chi tiết hơn về cách bạn học hát.
Example: Yes, my friend gave me many tips on how to sing better, so I practiced them during my free time, which helped me improve gradually.
Who do you want to sing for?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn bị thiếu phần cuối và có sự lặp từ "my friends". Hãy hoàn chỉnh câu và sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng hơn, đồng thời thêm chi tiết cụ thể về trải nghiệm hát cùng bạn bè.
Example: I prefer singing with my friends because they are good singers, and I feel relaxed around them. For example, we often go to karaoke bars together to enjoy singing.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, tránh lỗi như "give" thay vì "gives" và "new days" thay vì "a new day". Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý hơn.
Example: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness because it helps people relax and feel positive. For instance, many people sing to relieve stress after a long day.
Grammar
× I feel impressed when I sing in front of an audience.
✓ I feel embarrassed when I sing in front of an audience.
The word 'impressed' is incorrect here because it means feeling admiration, which does not fit the context. The student likely meant 'embarrassed', which means feeling self-conscious or uncomfortable, appropriate for singing in front of an audience.
× I tried to apply it when in my free time and I it uh, improved me a bit.
✓ I tried to apply them in my free time and it, uh, improved me a bit.
The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'tips', which is plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, the phrase 'I it uh, improved me a bit' is awkward; 'it improved me a bit' is correct.
× For example, I often go to karaoke with my.
✓ For example, I often go to karaoke with my friends.
The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'my'. The object 'friends' is missing, which is necessary to complete the sentence.
× I think singing usually give people PO positive emotion in their life which helps them relax and recharge the energy to start a new days.
✓ I think singing usually gives people positive emotions in their lives which help them relax and recharge the energy to start new days.
The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'people'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to correspond with 'people'. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'emotions'. 'A new days' is incorrect; 'new days' without 'a' is correct.
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