Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and unnatural phrasing. For example, 'I liked singing' should be 'I like singing' to express a current preference. Also, 'most favorite' is redundant; 'favourite' alone suffices. Try to use simpler, more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Example: Yes, I like singing very much because it is my favourite hobby. I enjoy it as it helps me to relax and express my feelings.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are minor grammatical issues such as 'for few days' which should be 'for a few days'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent, for example, 'However' or 'Unfortunately'. This will improve the flow of your response.

Example: Yes, I had the chance to learn classical singing from a professional teacher, but only for a few days. Unfortunately, I didn't continue for a longer period.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'which provide others to indulge' is incorrect. Try to organise your ideas more clearly and use linking words like 'because' or 'so that' to connect your points logically. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid run-ons.

Example: I would like to sing songs that reflect my spiritual beliefs because they inspire me. I also want to share my videos on YouTube so that others can enjoy and be motivated.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors, such as 'in their in their'. Also, the sentence structure is a bit confusing. Try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Keep your sentences clear and concise.

Example: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and feel joyful, especially during their busy lives.

× Yes, I liked singing very much as it is the most favorite hobby of mine.

✓ Yes, I like singing very much as it is my favourite hobby.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'liked' when the present tense 'like' is appropriate to express a current preference. Also, 'most favorite' is redundant; 'favourite' alone suffices. The correction uses present tense and removes redundancy.

× I like singing because I have been blessed by a beautiful voice by the Divine, so it is my best way to calm myself.

✓ I like singing because I have been blessed with a beautiful voice by the Divine, so it is my best way to calm myself.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used with 'blessed'; the correct preposition is 'with' to indicate the gift received. This correction improves the sentence's clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I've got a chance to learn from a professional teacher, particularly in classical singing, but only for few days.

✓ I've got a chance to learn from a professional teacher, particularly in classical singing, but only for a few days.

The phrase 'few days' without an article implies scarcity, but here the intended meaning is a small number, so 'a few days' is correct. Adding 'a' clarifies the meaning.

× I haven't pursued that for a longer period of time.

✓ I haven't pursued that for a long period of time.

The phrase 'a longer period of time' is comparative and requires a reference point; since none is given, 'a long period of time' is appropriate to indicate an extended duration.

× I am a spiritual kind of person and I would love to sing the songs which are related to my beliefs and ethics and also become inspiration for others to pursue their talents and although I will post my videos on YouTube which provide others to indulge.

✓ I am a spiritual kind of person and I would love to sing songs related to my beliefs and ethics, and also become an inspiration for others to pursue their talents. Additionally, I will post my videos on YouTube to provide others with the opportunity to enjoy them.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear connections and incorrect phrase usage. It lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation, making it confusing. The correction splits it into two sentences, clarifies the meaning, and corrects phrases like 'become inspiration' to 'become an inspiration' and 'provide others to indulge' to 'provide others with the opportunity to enjoy them.'

× Yes, significant.

✓ Yes, it is significant.

The original response is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. Adding 'it is' completes the sentence, making it grammatically correct.

× It plays a significant role in the lives of individuals and it has the ability to bring happiness and joy to the life of masses in their in their busy schedules, they can be relaxed and calm after listening the music.

✓ It plays a significant role in the lives of individuals and has the ability to bring happiness and joy to the lives of the masses. In their busy schedules, they can relax and feel calm after listening to music.

The phrase 'life of masses' should be 'lives of the masses' to correctly use plural and the definite article. The sentence is also a run-on and contains repetition ('in their in their'). The correction fixes these issues, improves flow, and corrects 'listening the music' to 'listening to music.'